@keilah-h
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
yeah, Cars and Phones BROKE ME
Last week my mom was at Mayo Clinic in Rochester doing more cancer treatments, which was hard since it wasn’t planned. I guess even if it was, it would be hard since she was gone for over a week and me and my siblings and my dad were all missing her a lot and attempting to keep our house from going out of…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Someone suggested I cut the last section of the blurb and leave it with the part about Jonathan’s friendship because it has more of a cliffhanger. What do you think?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
also mmm, I love cheesecake.
Why do I feel like Sniper would like cheesecake? XD. I don’t know, I can just picture him denying that he enjoys it.
@loopylin @theducktator @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @keilah
Thanks everyone!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
How’s everyone’s summer been going?
I’ve been really busy and tired but I plan on being more active and rejoining the role plays as soon as I start having more time.
Ya’ll been as busy as I have?
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Loopy replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
I’m now realizing I have a different definition of fear responses than what’s usual. I think the question still works though.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
DON’T YOU DARE. *hides Evan*
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Loopy started the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
This is just like a lot of other topics we’ve made, except in this one, I want you, the author, to answer the questions, not your characters. I tried to find a topic that was like this already but I couldn’t so I made this.
You may also post your own character questions for other people to answer.
Here’s my first question: What are your…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Aha, thank you. Fixed that.
Thank you so much for the feedback!!!!
DON’T KILL EVAN. I BEG YOU.
Oh how tantalizing this sounds…….. it would be such a sad death scene……………..
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Characters:
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
I thought all of them were. I guess Jonathan would be most interesting though.
~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
I always forget about Brian. He should…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Awesome, thank you so much!!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Nice! You hyphenated firstborn though, which is one word.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I’m glad you had fun! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!🥳🥳🥳
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I filled out your feedback form!
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@rae that’s awesome you got to have fun with your friends! Happy birthday!
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@keilah-h I’m going to get so depressed if I try to answer that question lol
@whalekeeper :((((
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I’m so glad it went well!!!! Happy Birthday, by the way!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Yay!!! I am so glad that you had a good time!!!!! And I am so glad that you did it! That sounds like an amazing day!
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