Keilah H.

@savannah_grace2009 I liked it! I can’t wait for more.

-The violence and stuff I can handle. About the only thing that would raise a red flag for me is what Rath did to Sef’s mom (I don’t remember her name), but you didn’t write that very descriptively and any discomfort I had with the scene was a me problem, not a problem with your writing.

-I…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium awww he’s cute!!

@theducktator

“Slothy doesn’t like going to the doctor because last time she had her back pulled out and stuffed full of donuts.”

Did that doctor look like this?

(just a sketch, not an actual portrait)

Cause I TOLD him I was gonna be nice and not let him get caught and convicted for malpractice, if only he behaved.

Stuffing someone’s spine…[Read more]

@rae

Oh, okay. The parts you added were actually my favorite and pretty easy to understand

yay!

Yes, they were great! They aren’t the normal way people usually title chapters, and I really like that, it fits with the story well.

I was partially inspired by….I wanna say they were Percy Jackson chapter titles, but I don’t remember too well. I d…[Read more]

@theducktator lol that’s their usual dynamic

Btw did you see I added chapter titles?

@savannah_grace2009 All righty! I’ll have to write some part of it for you to read.

and yeah I read fast lol

I’ll have to critique it fully tomorrow cause I don’t have time to type out a whole thing but I will get you that feedback!

@rae oh yeah and Alpha and Silvanis arguing sounds crazy.

why can I see a pair of angry Night Furies roaring at each other as the image of how that debate would go?

@rae thank you!! Glad you liked it, and yes I can agree the ending was amazing; when I read the original I was like “oh I gotta have this, it’s great”

I actually added the comic artist’s appearance; in the original, it simply shows them all talking and then the doorbell rings, then it switches to a panel of a door, then Scout opening the door an…[Read more]

@whalekeeper you’re welcome!!!

I read all of what you had so far!

Sef and Lilitu’s frog wedding was so funny lol

@savannah_grace2009 I’m liking it so far!!
I would say things are going a little fast, but that’s not you, it’s how fast I can read.
I love your character and place names, they’re really cool. And each new main character you introduce is really interesting!

I have a story idea which is kinda similar to yours in terms of genre and…[Read more]

@koshka ooooh very cool!!

@smiley good idea

I rarely go onto those sites too and if I do it’ll be specifically for a fic that has no shipping or that I’ve researched and know it’s clean shipping

and ugh I knowwwww nobody ever finishes their fanfics

like I read this one a little while ago that had a good plot and the characters were pretty accurate to the original…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I wouldn’t mind!

kinda like how the Half-life games and Portal games are technically in the same universe but what you do in one has literally no bearing on the other.

(sorry for that seemingly random analogy, I was busy writing a fanfic using that story universe earlier, possibly a sequel to my TF2 one)