@keilah-h
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power
Rinzler and Feather
Rinzler still thought Feather was too trusting, but he went along with the group as they meandered through the hallways.
“Are we really the only ones here?” he asked, looking around. “This castle doesn’t exactly look abandoned.”
“Could be an old World Controller school, like the Sanctuary,”…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emily-sf Milla sounds like a hypersense! They’re a species my brother created that are just like humans, but have super-enhanced senses. I don’t think they have radar, but they do have everything else. Also, they aren’t typically blind. But she sounds like she could be one!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power
Feather and Rinzler
“You need food?” Feather asked. “I sorta ran out of rations quite a bit ago, but there’s bound to be a kitchen somewhere.”
“I see you eyeing my discs. Don’t touch them unless you want one to your throat.” Rinzler hissed.
Hesh and Kent stood off to the side, watching.
“Rinzler!” Feather…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf Really cool! Yeah, Feather’s story is a little like that. I created her and her sisters without knowing what to do with them, then realized they fit perfectly into the Star Wars universe right about the time of The Bad Batch (if you’ve seen that show). She’s the main antagonist’s sorta girlfriend (at least before he turned evil anyway).…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf Yours is from a fanfic too? Awesome! Maybe she can meet my charries later…..
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Keilah H. replied to the topic If Hollywood adapted your novel… in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@valtmy Even though 99% of what I write is fanfiction anyway, I would not want the film industry  to adapt any of my stories without me in charge. They’d probably make all my fantasy stuff weird and dark. I would love seeing my Rexy picture books as a kids’ TV miniseries, but I’d probably create it and direct it and everything. I would NOT leave…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Rinzler
“The ‘Dark Player?’” Rinzler eyed the kid dubiously. They looked to be close in age, but that didn’t mean he trusted him. If anything, he trusted him even less than he trusted Hesh or Kent. “With a name like that, if I hadn’t already realized you’re completely foreign, I would’ve thought you were from m…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Feather and Rinzler
“Well, you’re a persistent one, aren’t you, love?” The new character smirked.
Feather wasn’t quite sure what to say to that. Rinzler growled audibly.
“All right. I’ll give you a deal. I’ll tell you my name…. if you can tell me where I am.” said the new character.
Feather looked around.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@hallie-jean Yep, the Tron series is a little-known story, but I love it (actually listening to the soundtrack right now). Rinzler as I have him doesn’t actually appear or exist–as far as I can tell, anyway–in the original movies, but the name “Rinzler” was once another alias for his father, Tron. So my brother (who works on the stories with m…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Age Gap in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Age gap of four years? Not a problem. My parents are six years apart. The pairs in my stories tend to be mostly around the same age, but as long as they’re not like, an old character paired off with a teenager, I think it’s fine.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@hallie-jean Funny story….Rinzler and Feather were both created for fanfictions. Rinzler came from a fanfic written for a series called Tron; he happens to be the son of the titular character. And Feather is actually supposed to be from the Star Wars universe. She and her four sisters were trained in the Republic’s army (three of them, including…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Feather and Rinzler
“Well,” said Feather, “that was rude.”
“Hmmph,” came Rinzler’s voice. He was still looking in the character’s direction.
“Don’t hurt him, Rinzler.” Feather told him. “That’ll make him even less likely to trust us.” She walked up to the character and stood in his line of sight. “My name’s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@hallie-jean Feather is a girl; she is sort of tall with blond hair and gray-blue eyes. She wears armor–if you’ve ever seen any Star Wars movies, something like clone/stormtrooper armor but splattered with paint. She wields a rifle.
Rinzler’s a boy. He has dark brown hair and brown eyes. His clothes are black and have light-up orange lines on…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@hallie-jean Maybe my characters could meet yours!
Feather and Rinzler
“Did you hear that?” Rinzler had both discs out, wary.
“It’s probably nothing,” Feather reassured him. They were out of the dungeons, wandering through the hallway again. Hesh and Kent were engaged in conversation behind them.
Suddenly, another c…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Have you ever written a sad ending to a story? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 4 months ago
Nope. Not yet. Bittersweet ending to an arc, maybe. Tragic and possibly hopeless ending, no. I’m really not that kind of person. I’ll give a character a sad death, let’s say, but not necessarily one without meaning. The tragic stories I do have end with the character surviving, or getting another chance, etc.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Feather and Rinzler
Feather awoke to darkness.
After a few minutes, her eyes adjusted to the dark to see Rinzler beside her, his lights glowing dimly. He sat up, and they flared a little brighter. Kent and Hesh were lying in the other corner, just waking up.
“Where are we?” Rinzler asked.
“Don’t know.” Feather replied.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Feather sniffed at the air. “Do you smell something?”
Kent, the leopard creature, sniffed it too.
Hesh had been asking questions, but he suddenly stopped and shouted, “Hold your breath!” He collapsed, and Rinzler gave him a confused look before he, too, fell to the ground.
Feather’s vision was getting blurry. She thought s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Feather and Rinzler
The cat introduced himself as Kent Briggs. “Like I asked him,” said Feather, “what’s your world like? What is it called? You remind me of one of the creatures from legends I’ve read, as I might have explained before.”
Rinzler looked around at the bright sky above him. “You think there are any native inh…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Feather and Rinzler
“Well, we technically come from two different worlds in the same universe, separated by vast stretches of space.” Feather explained. “That’s where the starships come in. They’re a little like water ships, but they have different shapes and engines on the back. They fly instead of traveling in the sea.” She…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Feather
Rinzler wasn’t taking their companions too well. Feather could see it in his expression. She could have a talk with him later.
“Here we are,” said Hesh, gesturing to the door they’d come through. They exited to a clear sky.
Feather looked back. “You two are from different worlds than Rinzler and I are. What are you…[Read more]
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