@keilah-h
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Rinzler
“The ‘Dark Player?’” Rinzler eyed the kid dubiously. They looked to be close in age, but that didn’t mean he trusted him. If anything, he trusted him even less than he trusted Hesh or Kent. “With a name like that, if I hadn’t already realized you’re completely foreign, I would’ve thought you were from m…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Feather and Rinzler
“Well, you’re a persistent one, aren’t you, love?” The new character smirked.
Feather wasn’t quite sure what to say to that. Rinzler growled audibly.
“All right. I’ll give you a deal. I’ll tell you my name…. if you can tell me where I am.” said the new character.
Feather looked around.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@hallie-jean Yep, the Tron series is a little-known story, but I love it (actually listening to the soundtrack right now). Rinzler as I have him doesn’t actually appear or exist–as far as I can tell, anyway–in the original movies, but the name “Rinzler” was once another alias for his father, Tron. So my brother (who works on the stories with m…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Age Gap in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Age gap of four years? Not a problem. My parents are six years apart. The pairs in my stories tend to be mostly around the same age, but as long as they’re not like, an old character paired off with a teenager, I think it’s fine.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@hallie-jean Funny story….Rinzler and Feather were both created for fanfictions. Rinzler came from a fanfic written for a series called Tron; he happens to be the son of the titular character. And Feather is actually supposed to be from the Star Wars universe. She and her four sisters were trained in the Republic’s army (three of them, including…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Feather and Rinzler
“Well,” said Feather, “that was rude.”
“Hmmph,” came Rinzler’s voice. He was still looking in the character’s direction.
“Don’t hurt him, Rinzler.” Feather told him. “That’ll make him even less likely to trust us.” She walked up to the character and stood in his line of sight. “My name’s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@hallie-jean Feather is a girl; she is sort of tall with blond hair and gray-blue eyes. She wears armor–if you’ve ever seen any Star Wars movies, something like clone/stormtrooper armor but splattered with paint. She wields a rifle.
Rinzler’s a boy. He has dark brown hair and brown eyes. His clothes are black and have light-up orange lines on…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@hallie-jean Maybe my characters could meet yours!
Feather and Rinzler
“Did you hear that?” Rinzler had both discs out, wary.
“It’s probably nothing,” Feather reassured him. They were out of the dungeons, wandering through the hallway again. Hesh and Kent were engaged in conversation behind them.
Suddenly, another c…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Have you ever written a sad ending to a story? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 4 months ago
Nope. Not yet. Bittersweet ending to an arc, maybe. Tragic and possibly hopeless ending, no. I’m really not that kind of person. I’ll give a character a sad death, let’s say, but not necessarily one without meaning. The tragic stories I do have end with the character surviving, or getting another chance, etc.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Feather and Rinzler
Feather awoke to darkness.
After a few minutes, her eyes adjusted to the dark to see Rinzler beside her, his lights glowing dimly. He sat up, and they flared a little brighter. Kent and Hesh were lying in the other corner, just waking up.
“Where are we?” Rinzler asked.
“Don’t know.” Feather replied.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Feather sniffed at the air. “Do you smell something?”
Kent, the leopard creature, sniffed it too.
Hesh had been asking questions, but he suddenly stopped and shouted, “Hold your breath!” He collapsed, and Rinzler gave him a confused look before he, too, fell to the ground.
Feather’s vision was getting blurry. She thought s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Feather and Rinzler
The cat introduced himself as Kent Briggs. “Like I asked him,” said Feather, “what’s your world like? What is it called? You remind me of one of the creatures from legends I’ve read, as I might have explained before.”
Rinzler looked around at the bright sky above him. “You think there are any native inh…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Feather and Rinzler
“Well, we technically come from two different worlds in the same universe, separated by vast stretches of space.” Feather explained. “That’s where the starships come in. They’re a little like water ships, but they have different shapes and engines on the back. They fly instead of traveling in the sea.” She…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Feather
Rinzler wasn’t taking their companions too well. Feather could see it in his expression. She could have a talk with him later.
“Here we are,” said Hesh, gesturing to the door they’d come through. They exited to a clear sky.
Feather looked back. “You two are from different worlds than Rinzler and I are. What are you…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Rinzler and Feather
Rinzler eyed the cat-like creature in front of him. Great, he thought. Another creature to follow us around.
The cat yakked on and on, finally coming to a stop. “…I don’t even know your names. Okay, I’ll shut up now.” he finished.
Feather’s apparent new friend—Hesh—introduced them all before Rinzler coul…[Read more]
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Keilah H. posted a new activity comment 4 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, they totally are.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Y'all help me storm my brain!!!! in the forum Plotting 4 years, 4 months ago
@faith-q I love the names on both your stories! The chemistry family one sounds cool. Astatine is a genius name for a dog.
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Keilah H. posted a new activity comment 4 years, 4 months ago
Ha, nice quote! Didn’t think he said much of worth like that, but I guess he did!
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Lolol it’s been a while since I read the books or watched the movies, but I’ve got great admiration for both Jango and Boba; they seem so cool haha
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Yeah, they totally are.
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I know this is an old topic, but believe it or not, Boba, Jango, and Din Djarin inspired my warrior people, the Realn. They are probably also the only reason I had any interest in Star Wars at all!
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Wow this really was from 2 years ago 🙃 I feel old and lost
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@rae The Mandalorians are so cool, aren’t they? I’m a bit partial to the clones, the way they were portrayed in the animated TV shows (Clone Wars, Rebels, Bad Batch), but I can agree the Mandalorians are an awesome group, both in their show and all the others.
It’s also really cool that they inspired your own people group!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Feather and Rinzler
“See? He just openly admitted he came here while trying to steal something!” Rinzler whisper-hissed.
“Ssshh, Rinzler.” said Feather. “We don’t know his motivation. In his world, he might very well be the good guy. Until he does something really wrong, I choose to trust him.”
“The last guy you trusted like that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Feather
“That’s kind of a cool name,” said Feather as Hesh introduced himself. “It sort of reminds me of the names from Rinzler’s world.” She walked down the hallway. “If this place is anything like the Sanctuary—a place in the world I come from—we should see more action once we get closer to the center.”
Unless we’re alone here, she…[Read more]
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I know this is an old topic, but believe it or not, Boba, Jango, and Din Djarin inspired my warrior people, the Realn. They are probably also the only reason I had any interest in Star Wars at all!
Wow this really was from 2 years ago 🙃 I feel old and lost
@rae The Mandalorians are so cool, aren’t they? I’m a bit partial to the clones, the way they were portrayed in the animated TV shows (Clone Wars, Rebels, Bad Batch), but I can agree the Mandalorians are an awesome group, both in their show and all the others.
It’s also really cool that they inspired your own people group!