Keilah H.

snarling at enemy upon killing them

never actually played the shooter game he’s derived from and honestly don’t really care for it. I’m just here for the awesome character design.

samples of the voice so y’all know what I’m talking about when I say his accent was really the thing I liked about him (might have to post ’em separately cause KP doesn’t like this kinda thing,…[Read more]

@rae haha

IDK, it’s your call lol

ooh I want a hat like that…..honestly I did before I discovered he existed.

@ellette-giselle oooh he looks awesome! I see I was actually pretty close on the clothing lol

@rae oh that’s hilarious lol

and trust me the version of him in the RP is a little toned down. probably because he’s got somebody doing that exactly.

@whalekeeper yep there’s my boy Mundy lol, forgot you were technically writing him for a fic

(yeah that’s his actual name, I’ve referred to him by it before)

he’s not forty, actually, there’s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @rae yeah I wasn’t saying Aragorn and Smalls were SPECIFICALLY designed to be Jesus archetypes, but the sheer fact that they are the good kings that win out over evil and take their thrones in the end means the writers were at least influenced by their worldview.

I mean, non-Christian authors do kinda the same thing sometimes, but…

That was funnier than any meme lol

hope you’re not offended by that. Didn’t mean it to be.

@whalekeeper don’t have time to explain till tomorrow, but I’ll have you know I DIED lauging when I saw how confused you were.

don’t tell my mom that haha

@theducktator THE ONE ABOUT MARRYING FICTIONAL CHARACTERS BRUHHHHH

you know Huntress and Sniper from the roleplay, right?

yeah, Huntress is kinda based off me because of that reason. I’m in the fandom they’re supposed to be from solely because I found Sniper attractive lol

odd question but what kind of accent does Mandin have? I see you’re making a point of sometimes cutting off the g’s at the end of verbs and using “ya” for “you.” I do that myself when writing characters with accents (specifically Southern  and Australian/Lower British ones), so that’s what I’m assuming you’re doing too.

also I like how you…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Thanks for second place! Also, having a specific character’s look in your head and thus criticizing based on that has nothing to do with being obsessed with fashion. That’s just you showing concern for your character. It’s totally ok.

I’ll be back with more feedback soon! Your story is really interesting, and I love its setting.

@rae Oooh it goes right into the action!

Here’s some feedback for the first chapter:

“He lost it after his battle from earlier, from which he’d gained the wound on his neck.”

I don’t know why, but mentioning the neck wound here feels rather abrupt. I’d think maybe move any mentions of his injuries to the part where talking about his jaw…[Read more]

@rae I don’t have a job…..?

@whalekeeper eheheheheh my current WIP (that clean-but-still-kinda-junky shooter game romance fanfic) has….let me check….

16172 words. that’s enough for 32 planks, or 3 character drawings. It’s also only about half finished.

I’m not going to post all that here though because I feel like that’d be torture for you. I’ll go look for something else.

@linus-smallprint Given that all your creatures a descendants of Adam, I realize it does make more sense for Jesus to only die and rise again in our world and it applies to them also. In Narnia, it was kinda different because most of the creatures were completely unrelated to humans. So yeah, the latter makes much more sense.

@rae awesome!! I’ll do it tomorrow for sure!

@ellette-giselle oh that’s funny lol

@ellette-giselle lol I can see why

my dad was never the handy type. My grandpa is though, and whenever he comes to watch the house while we’re away on a trip, he often does little fixes around the house.