@keilah-h
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
here you go!
my charries confronting each other on top of a train. Inspired by the hurricane that hit Florida last month; the wind sounds reminded me of what it would be like standing on top of a fast moving vehicle such as a train, so I drew this. Then I wrote a scene for why they were confronting each other, and then I revised it a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
I also have the drawing I based the original scene off of if anyone wants to see it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@everyone but @rae especially
This….barely counts as the story of a scar, or a short story. LOL.
I had a much better one in mind
but just didn’t have the drive to write it.So I pulled out a scene I had written for practice and added some extras to it, polished it down, etc.So instead of a clear, nicely written short story, you get three…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@rae I’m working on mine as well, although if I don’t get it done by today am I out? Like, is it ok if I get it up tomorrow?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle whoa, great drawings!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 that’s good! I’ll be praying for you and your family.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@rae @everyone else yeah I’ll get to this today, but it won’t be for a while lol. I had a story concept in mind, but never finished it so I’m just gonna redraft one I already had and was gonna share earlier but didn’t get around to it…..lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint oooh awesome! and you’re welcome!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
a little like this but a grizzly bear instead of a polar bear, and more vicious?
(not my art)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
If you’ve ever seen the first Puss in Boots movie from Dreamworks, there’s a giant mama goose that actually does a good amount of damage to the town she invades while looking for her chick, who the main characters stole. Basing on that alone (I’ve never met a free-roaming goose, that I remember at least), I can see just an ordinary giant goose…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint oh, good to know I’m not alone then! It’s not discouraging at all, it’s just one of those thoughts you have when you’re trying to sleep but your brain won’t let you. Y’know.
And I’m glad you have an explanation ready for why this section feels rushed. Makes sense.
and bruh that Canada meme! We have somethin’ like that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@grcr you’re welcome 😁
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint ooh interesting!!
Alan’s character development is showing through! It does seem a tiny bit sudden, but I don’t know cause I’ve never actually seen a person get saved and them follow their life immediately afterward. I was saved when I was really young and effectively don’t even remember it, so I can’t even use myself as an…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@grcr very cool, and I like his name!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle I echo Linus’s statement–this was a great way to re-introduce Adrian to the narrative!
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Keilah H. posted a new activity comment 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Honestly I do that with character names too. I try not to name characters even with placeholders until the last minute, because then the placeholder will get stuck as their actual name. Or they’ll still have remnants of that name affecting them or something.
Marcel is a much more unique name than Richard or Howard tbh, I like it way better.
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Keilah H. posted a new activity comment 2 months, 3 weeks ago
haha I hope so too.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@power I had a song on in the background that started epic then turned really goofy as I read your little poem and it was perfect for it lolllll
thing is, it was by complete coincidence.
@freed_and_redeemed oooh nice scene!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle no it’s not bad, I just haven’t read it yet. Lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 4 weeks ago
@grcr very cool!
also I agree with whalekeeper that the lower half of the body is a nightmare. I can’t draw the standard 8-head body length; all my characters end up six or so heads in proportional height because any time I try to draw legs as long as everyone says to, it always makes them look way too skinny and stretched.
Maybe that’s…[Read more]
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