Keilah H.

@ellette-giselle Thank you!!!!

You are getting so much better at guys and girls!

I’m glad you think that! Been practicing a bit.

I have art, finally! Lol

Chell from the Portal games as she appears in my stories. Also, her brother, a fan character of mine. You might remember him if you’ve seen the Hero Forge image I posted a little while back. His name’s Alex, but he’s referred to by his middle name, Jonathan, because there’s another character that goes by his first n…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

She’s not childlike. She’s a phantom of her childhood, dancing on the wind by the power of lunchables and red 40.

lol that’s cool.

@grcr wowwww that looks awesome!!

@ellette-giselle yep, pretty real to me lol

I might try it! If I can find a place to get the song.

@ellette-giselle The way you talked about Sniper sounds like he’s in the room looking over my shoulder at what I’m typing lolllllll

Which would actually be terrifying for a few reasons. But hey, it’s not like I haven’t also insinuated that my characters actually exist and know what I think of them lol

Anyway, that song is super cool, fits Ro…[Read more]

@rae That sounds cool!

@ellette-giselle I don’t know. Either way could work.

Oh, never mind, you found the typo.

Other than that, the cover looks beautiful.

Also, I have a few suggestions for the back blurb.

• You accidentally wrote “These children are forbidden to form any emotional that might hinder their unwavering loyalty.” Should it be “emotional bond” instead?
• “Jonathan, the second-born” should maybe be something like “Jonathan, a second-born.” But that one can stay in if you really want…

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@ellette-giselle That looks really good!!

I’m assuming the number changes for each sector.

It reminds me a little bit of the insignias my brother designs for his Icebreaker Empire universe. (He hopes to someday make a video game with a tie-in book series.)

@ellette-giselle yay!

@ellette-giselle I know right? It’s hilarious!

@ellette-giselle I love those lolllll

why are those so much like the things my characters would say (the first one is such a Blue and Rinzler kind of conversation to have lolllll)

@whalekeeper Lol

Glad you’re feeling good afterward!

@grcr I’m good with that!

@ellette-giselle you’re welcome!

@grcr I just found this forum, and while I’m gonna wait to put in a character until you’re done with Ellette’s (I bet it’s gonna look great, I can’t wait to see it), will you be able to do one of mine?

@rae

Lol. I’d be very curious to see my dear Hobbes as a Changeling-Ailurid cross. I think that’d be super cute!

I’m going to draw that sometime, it’d be cool.

Or I’ll make him in Heroforge and show a picture to you.

Probably both.

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I think they were all really good.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

I noticed some people said that Jonathan’s team needed to be a little more differentiated, but I…[Read more]