Keilah H.

HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE!

@rae oooooh I like that story!

@ellette-giselle wow! What an ending! I loved the descriptions of the different soldiers’ uniforms and stuff for some reason, and I’m so glad you didn’t kill them off. (I agree with @hybridlore that them dying would’ve worsened the book; it would’ve felt like Aaron’s story all over again. Speaking of which, I’m glad you brought the topic of him…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle super cool!

I think my dad might have a copy of Fox’s Martyrs, but I’m not sure.

So yeah, I will be sad, but I mostly get it.

@ellette-giselle which works for a story like yours which is, from what I can tell, supposed to be kinda like a fictionalized missionary/church history story.

@ellette-giselle

I’ve killed my fair share of teenagers….. and a few little kids……………..

Yeah, I have too, or at least not stopped such a thing in a fanfic if I’m rewriting it. but usually not a main character, and not super commonly on screen.

I mean if it’s realism, it kinda has to be done (oooof I sound so sadistic for saying that, I promi…[Read more]

but yeah I like the hymn at the back idea! maybe if you have any recipes, or games, or other things that you put an emphasis on through the story, you could add those too. If not to the main series you could have a guidebook where you put those special things + any maps you’ve made.

I honestly love those kinds of guidebooks.

and I’m the one that briefly considered violently blinding my character who kinda needs his sight for everything.

@ellette-giselle sorry ’bout that! Mostly I just read and enjoy the chapters. Others usually say what I have in mind.

you should be. I’m above nothing.

Executing a teenager and a pregnant woman is something even I would shy away from writing lol

no offense to them of course.

me hearing a term in a youtube video and then looking it up:

the search: what the heck does blorbo mean

google: “Blorbo” is internet slang that refers to a beloved fictional character from a TV show or other media, essentially meaning a character you have a strong personal attachment to and consider your “favorite” within that universe; it’s…

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@ellette-giselle wow! I’m kinda scared for them. I hope at least someone will make it out alive.

Also, I like the hymn and suggest you keep it in. Shortening it if you have to is okay, though.

My idea? You can put the whole hymn in the back of the book, and if there’s a tune you had in mind while writing it, add that too, so people can play…[Read more]

@whalekeeper oh that’s too funny! lol

My friend said she put me in a book once. I think I was some kind of elf character–I wanna say my character equivalent’s name was Cassiopeia. She had a really tall brother, whose name was Corvus.

Sadly I haven’t gotten to talk to this friend lately and I think she put that story off to the side anyway.

@highscribeofaetherium yeah, that’s a good outlook on it!

@rae I’m not familiar with this story about Baron, but I love it already!!

@whalekeeper whoa nice pictures of the art gallery! Where was that, exactly?

also cute doggie lol, what’s his name?

@rae I don’t know what you meant by saying your drawings are bad back when you refused to post them. They’re better than mine. Sure, I can get the overall shapes of characters down and stuff, but I can’t shade to save my…[Read more]

and the story was just so entertaining, so I was like “with a little work, I could fix this up and share it with everyone!”

@smiley actually, no, not star wars (surprisingly). But it is a sci-fi. It was based off this comic series (that I honestly don’t suggest looking up for reasons, part of my rewrite was to make a few of the jokes more appropriate and less Guardians of the Galaxy-dirty-humor-type) that I stuck an OC in for fun…..and to ship with my favorite…[Read more]

You know you are a writer when your latest google search is this:

time difference between bee cave texas and adelaide australia

and you have been to neither of those places and this is all for one line in a fanfic that might not even make it to the next draft.

(By the way, the cities are 16 hours and 30 minutes apart.)

here are some…[Read more]