Keilah H.

@theshadow ooooh that’s a good idea!!

@rae @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle lol

I end up deleting a lot of my search history but if I kept it I’d have some weird stuff too

oh also RAE THAT DRAWING IS AMAZING DON’T LET ANYONE SAY IT’S NOT

listen girl, I like to consider myself good at drawing, but I’m terrible at posing characters. You being able to do that puts you a step above…[Read more]

@theducktator Phew, it wasn’t him! You saved me the trouble of an awkward conversation.

lollllll

-The plot was good, I enjoyed what you have so far.

-I’d love to get a little more in depth on your worldbuilding, but you don’t need to do that, it’s just something I enjoy.

@savannah_grace2009 I liked it! I can’t wait for more.

-The violence and stuff I can handle. About the only thing that would raise a red flag for me is what Rath did to Sef’s mom (I don’t remember her name), but you didn’t write that very descriptively and any discomfort I had with the scene was a me problem, not a problem with your writing.

-I…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium awww he’s cute!!

@theducktator

“Slothy doesn’t like going to the doctor because last time she had her back pulled out and stuffed full of donuts.”

Did that doctor look like this?

(just a sketch, not an actual portrait)

Cause I TOLD him I was gonna be nice and not let him get caught and convicted for malpractice, if only he behaved.

Stuffing someone’s spine…[Read more]

@rae

Oh, okay. The parts you added were actually my favorite and pretty easy to understand

yay!

Yes, they were great! They aren’t the normal way people usually title chapters, and I really like that, it fits with the story well.

I was partially inspired by….I wanna say they were Percy Jackson chapter titles, but I don’t remember too well. I d…[Read more]

@theducktator lol that’s their usual dynamic

Btw did you see I added chapter titles?

@savannah_grace2009 All righty! I’ll have to write some part of it for you to read.

and yeah I read fast lol

I’ll have to critique it fully tomorrow cause I don’t have time to type out a whole thing but I will get you that feedback!

@rae oh yeah and Alpha and Silvanis arguing sounds crazy.

why can I see a pair of angry Night Furies roaring at each other as the image of how that debate would go?

@rae thank you!! Glad you liked it, and yes I can agree the ending was amazing; when I read the original I was like “oh I gotta have this, it’s great”

I actually added the comic artist’s appearance; in the original, it simply shows them all talking and then the doorbell rings, then it switches to a panel of a door, then Scout opening the door an…[Read more]

@whalekeeper you’re welcome!!!

I read all of what you had so far!