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@jenwriter17 So you already got through the Jonas visit scene! 😀

Oh yes, the haircut part is horrible.  I mean, if they could have just cut it below her ears!  But no, she got this horrible, scary haircut, and all her beautiful long hair is gone. 🙁

@seekjustice Wait till you come to America, then you can write an experience-inspired book ab…[Read more]

@seekjustice yeah sometimes I get set in one genre and can’t think outside of that. 🙂 For me right now, I can’t think outside of sci-fi/futuristic.

@rochellaine Hehe, yeah…we have these few different show series we just cycle through constantly, ’cause it’s hard for us to find a family-friendly show nowadays.

I’m reading the part where Chessy just escaped after being sentenced to hard labor. And if I remember correctly, Quillon is taking her to get her hair cut. That was a painful part of…[Read more]

@seekjustice Yup!  I was tired.  Fell asleep a little after twelve. 😉

@jenwriter17 What part of Stars are you at now?

You’ve watched the whole series several times?!!  There are fourteen seasons!  I’ve only seen a few episodes. 😛

@rochellaine Doing great as well. 😀 I’m reading Seekjustice’s book right now.

Yes, my family loves Bonanza! We’ve watched the whole series several times. 😉 I do like old tv shows. 🙂

@seekjustice Hi! I feel like it’s been a while since I’ve been on here. 🙂 What are you working on?

@jenwriter17 I’m doing great!  How about you?

What are you working on now?

I’m going to watch Bonanza with my family later tonight, so I’m excited about that.  Have you ever seen it?  You do like old tv shows, right?

@rochellaine Yup, still here. 🙂 How are you?

@jenwriter17 You still around?

@seekjustice @valtmy @alia I’m studying/writing/getting distracted 😀

@dekreel I miss you again!  Where have you disappeared to? 😉

@ariel-ashira @seekjustice @rochellaine @dekreel @dragon-snapper @alia @catwing @valtmy Hi, I’m reading Seekjustice’s book and working on a blog post for tomorrow. Anyone on?

@kaymart Yeah I think that’s a good idea, though I don’t know if I’ll be able to critique every bit of story you post. But I’ll do my best. 😉 I really like the part you posted there; Rochellaine covered the suggestions I’d have too.

@kaymart Hey!  That sounds very interesting.  I can’t promise I’ll be able to critique all your bits and pieces, but I can give you my comments on this one. 🙂

So, that bit of writing is very intriguing.  I like the simple symbolism of the bending grass.  One thing I think should probably be reworded is the part where Marcus says why he can’t lea…[Read more]

@alia Ah, I see. 🙂

Well, I would guess that’s probably because I’m only nineteen, so most people would assume I was in my first or second year.  I started college a bit younger than the average age, I think. 😉

Part of what I like so much about Daughter of Judas is that my “antagonists” are the Christians, so that’s a big twist on the average…[Read more]

@alia That sounds interesting, though not something I’d want to do.  I can’t stand anything that has to do with medical stuff. 😛  I hope it goes well for you.

No, I’m actually halfway through my third year.  I’ll graduate in December of 2019.

Ah, I’ve even forgotten or skipped scenes I wrote for specific spots in my books. 😉  I guess it’s bec…[Read more]

@alia I’m doing pretty well, but am extremely tired.  However, I have quite a bit of studying to do, so I’ll be attempting to keep awake for a while and review some legal definitions… 😉

Oh, fun!  I write a lot of little scenes, and often many of them don’t end up in the finished book, 😛 so it’s cool that you’re able to actually put that in.

@alia Hey, how are you doing?

What are you working on?

@catwing 😀  Curly black hair is basically all you need to know.  He’s pretty easy to spot. 😉

@seekjustice You here yet?

@alia Okay, I’ll definitely be praying.

@valtmy That’s the same thing that happened with my western and DoJ.  I currently have been actually writing on DoJ and making notes for my western, but that could change at any moment. 😀

@seekjustice Bye!  I’m leaving now too.

@seekjustice Ah, I don’t know.  Sometimes it’s fun to criticize.  I mean, if we know better than the writers, we must know a lot, right?  And isn’t it fun to know a lot?  Or at least, to feel like you know a lot on one particular subject?

I was just on a quiz website the other day and passed the grammar, history, and literature tests with fly…[Read more]

@valtmy Good question.  Maybe the house is backed up to a hedge, and since the stairs are easily seen by anyone, he wants to go by the hedge so no one can see him talking to her?  They could be in the terribly cliche situation where her parents hate the guy, or at least he thinks they do, or he could be in hiding for some terrible crime against t…[Read more]