Kylie

You know you’re a KaPeeFer when you try to sneaky-sneak other KaPeeFers into your books. (Yes, I have a dragon named Snapper. And catwings. And a Ranger named Addie.)

@aislinn-mollisong XD I’ve been cameo-ed.

@skredder Perfect!  No more comments. 😀

@ariella-newheart I’m terribly late. *facepalm*

I’m the dragon that wrote the Legend of King Daeus that @claire-c and @dekreel were talking about. 😛

(And Claire-c, as for the Aberdeen question, I’ll see if I can, but these are not the easiest stories to write. XD)

So… Ariella, what do you like to write?

Hi @sam-kowal!  That story sounds hilarious! 😀

Oh, great!  I just realized that sounded like a big advertisement!  Well, it can’t be, because none of you know who I am! 😀  I was just trying to explain that I actually am more interested and invested in my writing than it sounds from my first post here.

@aedesia Welcome to Kingdom Pen! 😀

@dekreel Nope. Never been sued. Though I should be. *grins* @rochellaine *looks at you* *promptly melts a chair*

@seekjustice Hey, no problem. I do have like 5 other people reading it. XD But yeah, the general stuff is just as important as the normal stuff, so if you are willing to do that, it would be amazing!

@daeus XD Yep. I am extremely determined. 😛

@catwing It’s so nice to find someone who believes that witchcraft is wrong!

@catwing Oh, I remember the war!

Well, at least that there was going to be a war.  😀

Do you remember my time travel book at all, or has it been too long? (It’s okay if you don’t, I’m just wondering.)

I’m here working on my western! @ariella-newheart Hi!

@livgiordano  You’re torturing me!!!!

They should make the giving of spoilers a violation of the forum rules.  It causes too much trauma.

😀 😀

@skredder Looks much better now!  The sentence you used as an explanation for Casse does it’s duty, but is a bit ungrammatical…And I missed one of the POV changes which can be fixed if you just change two words.

If you check the document one more time you’ll see a couple of new comments.  Other than those, I think it’s great!  Can’t wait to re…[Read more]

@daeus Actually, after reading everyone else’s answers I want to clarify.  I already have self-published seven books and am in the process of publishing another.  I have very good reviews from several of the many purchasers of my first six books. (I’ve sold over a hundred books.)  So, though as @clairec said, writing is more of a hobby for me th…[Read more]

@livgiordano OH NO!!!! I haven’t finished the last book yet!!! Is that a spoiler?  *screams* *bursts into tears* What am I going to do if Edmund dies?  Please tell me that doesn’t happen!

Okay, @skredder I’ve made a few comments indicating where you changed POVs.

I have a couple more comments to make.  One is that you usually capitalize “Prince” even when you’re not using it as a noun but as an adjective.  The only time I’ve seen “prince” capitalized except as a name like “Prince John” is when the writer is speaking about the “…[Read more]

signing off. bye! 😊

@skredder Yes, it works!  I’ll make a few comments.

@salome01w4g Praying!  What time zone are you meaning when you say 5 pm?

@sarah-anson Wow!  Those names are really cool!  I especially like the names Laria and Efren.

@warrenluther04 There are a lot of people here (including myself) who jump at the chance to beta-read.  Part of that reason is we all love the chance to read a free story! 🙂

Since I rarely read fantasy and am quite uncomfortable with magic, I might instead just tag people to read your story, but you’ll definitely be able to find several willing…[Read more]