Kylie

@kaya-young Sorry I didn’t get back when I planned.  I got tied up. But I hope you’ll be a frequenter of this topic from now on!

That does sound interesting.  One of the things I like best about sci-fi is when it’s well thought out and researched.  In one of the Tom Swift Jr. books Tom makes a zero gravity machine by making a huge box with di…[Read more]

@itisastarrynight

Is Jenna yourself, or one of your OC s?

I just now saw this question… Nope, it’s an OC. Not me 🙂

@rochellaine wow, thank you! I’m glad your sister liked it too. 🙂 (I may be hooked on writing poems now. Rochellaine, what have you done to me?)

I dunno maybe Charlie just rocked the dance floor with the octopi 😉 🙂

@daughteroftheking well, the helichrysum oil actually helps to build tissue (but I’m not sure exactly what kind of problem you’re having). The comfrey salve just heals things generally. But you can’t apply it to an open wound or a surgery wound. I think it helps with broken bones too. my brother used it on his broke toe. But if you’re going to…[Read more]

@seekjustice  CONFETTI CANNON!

@rochellaine  @kaya-young  @jenwriter17  @anyone

I’m editing!

@seekjustice Congratulations! 😀 😀

Thanks, and hope to see you again by Monday! (that means Tuesday, in Australia, though.) 🙂

@kaya-young Cool!  Glad you finally joined us here.  It’s a lot of fun.  I’ll be dropping out for about half an hour and then I’ll be back.  If you’re still here later I’ll see you.  What are you working on?

@kaya-young  *blinks away tears*  That’s such a beautiful song! Wow… It’s amazing. Thanks for sharing it! 😉

@daughteroftheking 😀 😀 Someone should write an argumental dialogue between a person and her (personified) Sanity.  At the end Sanity decides it isn’t appreciated and leaves, and the the person can’t do anything anymore and has to beg it to come back…

@rochellaine You’d be surprised how often that happens to me… Apparently, my sanity is underappreciated. ;P

@epicaddie2 @sam-kowal @skredder Thank you all!

@jenwriter17 I haven’t tried anything like that, but I don’t know what is causing the problem, so I don’t know what kind of medicine would be the right thing. What kind of things do those treat?

@kaya-young You’ve never been on the Writers’ Corner before???

Or did I read that wrong? 🙂  I have been known to do that…

@kaya-young That’s exactly how it works. 😀  I wasn’t here when you posted, and I’m sure you left long ago, but I’m here now.

You can either just announce that you’re writing and hope someone is around to see it and join you, or you can get to know who is around at what time, or check the list of who is active on the forum and tag people to ask…[Read more]

@reaganramm  I just watched the video.

I… I didn’t know you did this for me!! X’D   BTW, it’s pronounced DEE-kreel XD (see signature)

Anyway, thanks SO much for the video! It was really good advice 😀

@kaya-young I didn’t really see anything you did badly in the passages you have there, but I do like what @daeus said about defining your characters.

Each character should have a slightly different voice.  So, whereas one person says “I don’t know,” maybe the second person doesn’t like contractions, and says “I do not know.”  (I have a sister w…[Read more]

Wow. You guys make me smile X’D

@dragon-snapper  *looks at un-melted chair* *looks at you* *looks back at chair* Whoa. Thanks, Snapper!

Also, when I read “He won’t let you go,” I almost cried. It’s so true. Have you heard that Switchfoot song, I Won’t Let you Go? That’s what came to mind. (Obviously HAHA)

@audrey-caylin  Woww, I LOVE that m…[Read more]

@kaya-young  The first part would flow much better if you separated the topics like this:

“You did a really good job with your prayer!”
“Thanks.”
Who wrote it again?”
“It was Teresa of Avalanna.”

And obviously you can put the non-dialogue parts where you find the most fitting.

At the end of the second part, maybe occasionally tell what the ch…[Read more]

@sam-kowal Thanks!

Thing One and Thing Two prancing through the halls with pots of blue dye meant for JJ

That is a most intriguing idea. 😀

@jenwriter17 That’s your first time?  Wow.  I love it!  And I read it to my sister, and she loved it too.  It’s hilarious.  But what happened to Charlie when you fainted? 😀 😀 😀

@supermonkey42 I love the…[Read more]

signing off…

@supermonkey42 *gobbles ice cream* oh my goodness isn’t homemade ice cream THE BEST?! McDonald’s McFlurries don’t have anything on homemade ice cream!

@kaya-young I’m by no means an expert on dialogue, buy yeah it looked good to me 🙂