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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice And I don’t imagine Zac wearing a leather jacket. 😛 I don’t think I’ve ever thought of what Zac would wear, actually. Let me see, I think it would possibly be a slim cut t-shirt tucked into dark jeans or khakis with an open, untucked button-down which he takes off and on when he gets hot or cool. Since he’s rich but partially la…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice That depends on the jacket. (I have a light leather coat that is not hot at all, but my mom has a fleece-lined leather coat that is extremely heavy and hot.) I think leather lined with fleece is the reason you would usually think of leather jackets as hot, such as an aviator jacket. A jacket that is just thin, cured leather wo…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice Oh my, I did not mean “that looks hot” as in it’s goodlooking. 😛 I meant it looks like it would make the wearer hot and sweaty. 😛 😛 Whew, that was…rather upsetting.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice Haha, we don’t watch much in the way of movies or shows either, but when we do, it’s usually older stuff. Or documentaries. (Yes, I have actually seen a lot of old movies and shows, but a lot of the ones I talk about are ones that I actually haven’t seen the full version of, like Carousel, which I’ve just seen a lot of clips of, o…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
My post disappeared. Here it is again:
@seekjustice‘s sister You’re breaking my heart! 😛
@seekjustice Is your entire family so prejudiced against my favorite classic shows and movies and musicals and actors and singers and writers??? 😮
Hm, that’s interesting. What kind of jacket is it, then? A suit jacket/blazer, or a light coat cut st…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Yippee!! Third edit and the gif finally worked. 😛
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@jenwriter17 Yes! He’s not my favorite either, but @seekjustice actually said “no one likes Kendall,” so I had to protest. I don’t like him best, but that doesn’t mean that I don’t like him at all.
Thank you for your support! 😛
Oh, and have you read any of the second draft yet?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice Aw, too much like a cowboy? All because of the hat, I’m sure. Try these:


Or Clint Eastwood’s son, Scott Eastwood, with a black leather jacket just like Justice?

Why thank you! But you still aren’t going to use any of them, are you? 😛 Nope, didn’t think so. Maybe I should write an AU and save Zac myself, since you won’t. 😉
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine haha, yes I like Kendall too. I wouldn’t say he’s my favorite, but yeah I like him. 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice and @seekjustice‘s sister but you gotta be impressed with how many plot twists I came up with that Zac could be rescued in without Justice being killed in his place! Right? I was carefully keeping Justice out of it. 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice Here are my ideas for plot twists.
Stasya could rescue Zac because he is big and strong and could just smash everyone that gets in their way as they’re escaping.
Sean Darcy could have a change of heart (brought on by Zac’s sacrifice) and tell everyone Zac isn’t Justice.
Jean could get all his gold that he kept in his mansion away…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice Oh my goodness! I’m so sorry. 😛 I actually meant Clint Eastwood, in reference to the pictures I was talking about with you earlier. However, I’ve never seen a single Clint Eastwood film, and I’m not sure that I’ve even seen any clips of him acting, so I only know him by sight, really. I constantly get his name mixed up with sev…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice‘s sister
Forgive me! 😛 Anyway, if Justice had died instead of Zac I’d probably like him way better than Zac. It’s this thing where I always go for the guy who doesn’t get the girl. I want Zac to get Chessy because she loves Justice, but if she loved Zac instead I’d want her with Justice, because I’d feel bad for Justice. That pr…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice Haha. 😛 Don’t worry, I like Quillon too. I just never feel the need to stand up for him since you adore him so much already.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@catwing Yay!! A second vote for Kendall!! (Yes, that face thing is cute. 😛 )
@jenwriter17 Um, when you get a chance, could you come over here and cast your vote? For my side? Please?? @seekjustice says no one cares for Kendall! How could she say such a cruel thing? I care for Kendall. Don’t you? (If you don’t, go back and read Waif’s…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice Well, so does Justice, so, come on. 😛 And Chessy, like, for the first half of the book she is purposefully disobeying her father! That may not seem as bad as Kendall’s lifestyle, but I would say, remember that Honor your Parents is in the Ten Commandments, while Keep from being a Drunkard is not. 😮 Okay that’s not really a great a…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@catwing 😛
Oh, oh, oh!!!! hahahaha!!!! I love them!! Thanks so much! I especially like the “step into the water and get electrocuted” one. 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice That was the biggest and most obvious instance. I think there were a few other times when he seemed a little too soft, but I’ll have to go back through and read it again. For the most part it’s all good.
I LIKE KENDALL!!!!!!! How can you say no one likes Kendall? Anyway, even Justice cares about him, as we established when Jus…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@catwing Well, by all means! Please give me your ideas! One condition, make them as absurd as possible, and they aren’t supposed to work in real life. That’s the entire point! 😛
Yes, I know the papers would burn, and I know that doctors would not be that incompetent in real life. These faking death sequences are supposed to be in the ima…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice 😛
Yes, I agree. Your characters are the most important parts of your book. My biggest issue in the second draft was with Justice’s character, remember? 😉 And actually the Rain thing is specifically about her character. I feel like now that she’s “in love” with Justice instead of having a flirty kind of crush on Kendall she is…[Read more]
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