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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin
I really dont know how it should go yet 😀 But heres the whole story together. It might help anyone create another piece 🙂 What should we call it? Or should we wait till its finished. We can start thinking of names now!
One bright sunny day, I watched a gir…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
This is based off of Deuteronomy 8:2-3
Journey on and don’t forget
the One by Whom you’ve been led,
the One by Whom you’ve been fed
Wand’ring in the wilderness.
Remember the road marked with tears
Yet held year to year
by your Guide Who loves you dear
Journey on and don’t forget.
Up and through and by and with
In dark storms or…
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
Awh, your poem is so good! I can picture all the friendship and love. You said it was from a prompt. Is it inspired by one of your friends?
I love your poem! I too love thinking about God’s blessings and His ways of coming on the scene and bringing transformations.
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Allison replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
@felicity@starshiness@elanor
Those are all amazing! They each are so beautiful and they paint a picture and are meaningful! If you have any more, please share! 🙂
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Allison posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
@esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @landric @booksbyjayna @landric
Hi! Im not going to be on KP to much this week. We are driving cross country and getting to our stops pretty late. Ill be on as often as I can, but it might take me a while to reply! -
Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 1 month ago
Thank you, Esther! This is for the next part in the allegory!
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Janellebelovedpig started the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 1 month ago
@acancello @esther-c @felicity @any other poets or poetesses.
I can’t figure out how to punctuate throughout and also at the end of the lines. Thoughts?
The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever
Desirable far beyond refined gold
Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether
Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb
Turning simple to…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
Wow! That was really good!
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Allison replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
Yes, please share it! I would love to read it!
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Allison replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
Those poems you wrote are amazing!! I would share some of mine, but I have them all saved to my moms computer which we packed away. I like to write about nature, people and basically everything! My most recent poem was for my neighbors, when they moved I gave it to them and they cried. It was all about how much of an impact…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
No, you didn’t do wrong, you can write as much as you’d like! 🙂
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
Sometimes I write prayers as poems/songs:
Thank You Lord that I’m no longer
lost as to my future
or hopeless as to my past.
the pain, terrors, fears and failures I thought would last
instead have melted away
in the light of the rays
of Your wondrous grace
and mercies new with the dawn.
Or little devotional thoughts:
When in the…
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(@acancello Fun idea!)
As I watched this girl, I wondered what her secret was. There she was walking through the park in front of my house while I watched from my front porch. She seemed on a mission. She had a purpose in her steps. A smile gently curled the edges of her mouth as she thought about it. I stood up slowly, wondering if I could…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
I write poetry! And songs, which are basically poems with a melody.
Actually, the next part in Little One’s Journey will involve one of my poems, sort of like how J.R.R.Tolkien puts songs and things in the Hobbit and LOTR and also how Hannah Hurnard puts songs and poems in Hind’s Feet on High Places.
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@kyronthearcanin @acancello @esther-c
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Allison started the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @euodia-vision @janellebelovedpig @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkeness6
I was just wondering if anyone on KP still write poetry and/or haiku’s? I was wondering if you wanted to talk about them, share them and critique them for each other! Just let me know!
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Allison started the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @kyrothearcain @janellebelovedpig @landric @booksbyjayna @euodia-vision @everyone who wants to join!
I made up a fun game that we all can play! So its crazy easy… Step one, im going to post a sentence, paragraph, huge piece etc of unfinished work. Then one of you are going to add the next piece…[Read more]
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Allison posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
@esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @landric @booksbyjayna @landric
Thank you all for the prayers! The move has been going great! We leave in 5 days! Saying goodbye to everyone has been hard, but better because I know I will see them again. I just wanted to let you all know that I will be on…[Read more]-
You’re so welcome!! Aw, that’s great!! Okay sister! I’ll continue to pray for you and your family. No worries girl! I probably won’t be on much this week either. Talk to you then! ❤
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I’m glad it’s going well! I hope you have a blessed week!
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You’re so welcome!! I’m so glad everything’s going well for y’all! 😀 I’ll continue to keep you in my prayers! ❤️
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Praying hard for you!! I know this is difficult, but you know the Author of your story. Keep us updated! ❤️
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Allison replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
The next 2 chapters you wrote are amazing! I love how each chapter draws you in! Like @kyronthearcanin , I am excited to see where its heading!
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in
And here’s part 3:
All day long Little One tried to catch Loving Prudence alone, but the siblings always seemed to be around. Then just before supper Little One saw her chance.
As Little One stepped into the kitchen, Loving Prudence looked up from her…[Read more]
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How was your trip?
Hi! I’m soooooooo sorry that it took me so long to respond. We have no internet at our new house and we are getting it in a bit longer than a week. KP doesn’t work very well on my phone at all, so I’ll try to be on in a week! I miss you all!