@kate-flournoy
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Those are some good ideas, @kate-flournoy . I was thinking that I needed to either make the story more about the princess, or the peddler, and I started to go with the princess, which is why I cut out some at the end that talked about his life after the whole affair. However, what you wrote made me think about it some more, and I think the…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
@overcomer
I like this a lot! It has a very fairytale-ish feel (sorry for stealing your words, @ethryndal), which is what I’m sure you were going for. So nice job!
1. Try not to use parentheses as much as you do. Example:She plopped (rather ungraciously) back down on the divan and patted the spot next to her.
2. It might just be me but using the…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Hey guys,
I’ve been working on this short story I wrote a while back, and I thought it might be a good idea before I get started on the next draft to ask for your opinions and see if any of you have ideas for improving it. (I’d really appreciate them!) 🙂
I wrote draft 1 1/2 recently and looking over it afterward, it occurred to me that it’s…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Hey guys,
I’ve been working on this short story I wrote a while back, and I thought it might be a good idea before I get started on the next draft to ask for your opinions and see if any of you have ideas for improving it. (I’d really appreciate them!) 🙂
I wrote draft 1 1/2 recently and looking over it afterward, it occurred to me that it’s…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose @daeus @overcomer @ethryndal @northerner @perfectfifths @kina-lamb @kate-flournoy @the-bean @hope @jane-maree @graciegirl @r-j-wordsmith @allthepeoples
I’m here! I’m here! I know it’s been a while, but I’m here now! -
Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
So, excitement!
I just submitted my story to the Home Life contest and am currently waiting for a reply from the Bunyan contest people due to *ahem* technical difficulties (i.e. I put my email address in wrong D: )
So as soon as that can be fixed, the second story will entered as well 🙂
Thanks for everyone’s tips and support! Thanks you, Daeus…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy wow. That’s…super long…
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy Well, my books are about a sixth of the size of yours.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy Actually, I finished the chapter, so I’m going to go ahead and stop, but I got 285 written. I’m now over halfway through with my next book. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy @anyon-else I’ll be writing till nine or whenever I get 650 words done.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy I was learning at one point, but then we moved, and all my calligraphy stuff got packed away somewhere and I haven’t seen it since. *sigh*
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@daeus @jane-maree @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @graciegirl
I’ll be writing for a short 10 minutes if anyone ‘d like to join me!
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Joy Mastron replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy I just got out of class and Christi was bragging about you so I had to come and see. And I am not disappointed, this is so gorgeous! I love this so much, it’s amazing! And your lettering. Just wow. It’s so beautiful, I’m just in love, Kate! This is astounding.
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Oops, still getting used to this, @kate-flournoy
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy I am drooling over your lettering, double r or not…
By the way, I love the shading on her face (despite not being pale 😉 ), particularly that highlight on her cheek. Maybe that’s a weird thing to like… XD
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy, she looks so good! You definitely captured her attitude! *round of applause* Now it’s just waiting for Joy to see it 😉
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 14: Theme & Villain in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@audrey-caylin What Daeus said. You can have non-personal antagonistic forces, but something like that would just be a negative EiL
@kate-flournoy Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. I love how Eldred functions as the villain here. That’s fantastic. Would Eldred be the Primary Tempter then, or does he function more as one of the other roles? And then Egann…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper Well, I’m really late, but if you’re out there, I’ll still be going till nine.
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Joy Mastron replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy honestly, I’m very very flattered, thanks 😉
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy I didn’t know Victorious was published! (It is, isn’t it??)
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