@kate-flournoy
Active 8 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I have no words @kate-flournoy Thank you.
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
“You can go back and fix things you already put down, but you can’t fix what isn’t there.”
Awesome advice, Kate! 🙂 @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Yeah. I did.
That’s great, Kate, but it isn’t me. I didn’t write that, and I don’t think I can right now. I’m not that good.
I get the point you’re trying to make, though. @kate-flournoy
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Signing off. I got a chapter edited. Hope you get your breakthrough.
@kate-flournoy See ya.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Chapter Three:
As I walk briskly down the hall, the lights above me dim. The flickering bulbs cast an eerie, ominous splash of ashy gray on the pale walls. My footsteps are the only sound I hear.
Clip, thump, clip, thump, clip, thump.
“Is he insane?!”
Well. That escalated quickly.
The sudden shout makes my heart leap into my chest, and…[Read more] -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I need help. *glances wearily at the novel excerpt forum so we don’t disturb @daeus*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Excellent point. @daeus
Ugh. I’m trying to write, but my brain is full of ideas and I can’t quite make sense of them all. Kate, dear, are you on? @kate-flournoy
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @kate-flournoy Ok, I’m back!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I LOVE IT. @kate-flournoy
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy *Looks up* *sees you’ve already taken your seat* *shakes head* Nobody ever asks my advice.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
The wonderful @kate-flournoy has graced the Writing Corner with her presence! *cue applause*
Of course, Kate. Anything for my favorite Force-wielding telepathic dragon.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Wow. *jaw drops* Is that a snippet from your WIP? @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Boom. Kate wisdom. Love it. @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
On a side note, I’ve decided to start calling you Jedi-Master Kate. @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Not really.
I…*sighs* Have you ever seen the animated TV show “Avatar: The Last Airbender”? The “bending” on that show is based off of four different forms of Chinese martial arts. That’s how I’m picturing the Elemental powers–what they’ll be like–will be used.
Kara uses fire as an extension of her body. It’s a part of her she can’t even…[Read more] -
Gracie replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy Yay!!! Oh, but how could dear, sweet little Evaleen possibly be a villain?! 😛
Actually, I can see it. I have what you might call a love-hate relationship with that girl. *glares at manuscript* 😉 We all have the ONE character that drives us bonkers.@That_Writer_Girl_99 I shall be wary. ;P
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Also, their conversation would be a great way to say a lot of things about the way things really are in the prison by not saying them. Good dialogue illuminates what people are not saying, I’ve heard it said, and I agree. There’s more in what’s not said than what is.
Huh. Good point, but…things like what? @kate-flournoy Also, thank you for s…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
Kate, I’m popping over to the novel excerpt forum to read your reply. I had work this morning, so I couldn’t answer when you commented. @kate-flournoy
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Gracie replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 @Kate-Flournoy Thank you, guys. 🙂
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Gracie replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Hi, guys. I’d like to put in a prayer request for my mother. The past two months or so have been really rough for her on an emotional level, and the stress of homeschooling three kids in the middle-school to high-school range isn’t helping. If you could pray for God to give her peace and strength it would mean so much. And for me as well. I am…[Read more]
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