@kate-flournoy
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
@Ingridrd @jadamae thank you for saying so. Your praise encourages me to continue with poetry writing. This is one of the few poems I have written that I think is any good, but you make me want to edit the bad ones and see if I can’t make something of them after all. Who knows? 🙂
As to the name, I’m so glad we’re all of the same mind! That…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
@Ingrdrd @jadamae thank you for saying so. Your praise encourages me to continue with poetry writing. This is one of the few poems I have written that I think is any good, but you make me want to edit the bad ones and see if I can’t make something of them after all. Who knows? 🙂
As to the name, I’m so glad we’re all of the same mind! That…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
@Ingrdrd @jadamae thank you for saying so. Your praise encourages me to continue with poetry writing. This is one of the few poems I have written that I think is any good, but you make me want to edit the bad ones and see if I can’t make something of them after all. Who knows? 🙂
As to the name, I’m so glad we’re all of the same mind! That…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
@Ingrdrd @jadamae thank you for saying so. Your praise encourages me to continue with poetry writing. This is one of the few poems I have written that I think is any good, but you make me want to edit the bad ones and see if I can’t make something of them after all. Who knows? 🙂
As to the name, I’m so glad we’re all of the same mind! That…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
I have a quick question for y’all, @kate-flournoy , @bluejay , @daeus
Did any of you guys read the poem before your read my description of what it’s about? If you did, do you think you would have enjoyed it half so much if you knew before you read that the poem described a typewriter?
I think the answer to this will significantly narrow down…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Battle Power in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 6 months ago
@gretald That’s not a bad idea…except the bad guy’s army won’t know he’s dead. At leas, they won’t see it, so I don’t think that will work. I want something more than common fleeing.
And yes, @Kate-Flournoy, it is a spear. (A SPEAR, EVERYONE, NOT A PEAR) And it’s too late to go back and edit the post. ;(
The horn, hmm. Possibly, though for the…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Battle Power in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 6 months ago
@gretald That’s not a bad idea…except the bad guy’s army won’t know he’s dead. At leas, they won’t see it, so I don’t think that will work. I want something more than common fleeing.
And yes, @Kate-Flournoy, is a spear. (A SPEAR, EVERYONE, NOT A PEAR) And it’s too late to go back and edit the post. ;(
The horn, hmm. Possibly, though for the…[Read more]
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Greta replied to the topic How to Create Good Conflict in the forum Plotting 10 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy, Ah! Thank you for clearing that up! I was getting confused between personal character goals and the main story. So now that I think about it, in my WIP the main story goal is to defeat the bad guys, like you said, but the MC’s goal is to find love. The MC is an orphan, and she’s had a pretty bad life so far…so her goal is to…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
*pauses on the edge* “Breathe deep, Breathe deep.” JUMPS! *Right I’m in. Now let’s go see if I can write something. 😀
Thank you @kate-flournoy.
but the successful writers are the disciplined ones
There is a line in a movie (which @rolena-hatfield should know) which says “If honesty offends me, than I am in most need of it.” Don’t ever stop tells…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy. Help. Ok, so I’ve kinda overcome writer’s block. I can think of lots of good ideas, but I can’t get the words to flow. Any suggestions?
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Greta replied to the topic How to Create Good Conflict in the forum Plotting 10 years, 6 months ago
The conflict is in reaching the goal, not the goal itself.
@kate-flournoy, yeah, that’s what I was trying to say, but you said it better. 😉 😛
Yes, character conflict is quite interesting. In the novel I’m working on with my sister (@ingridrd), we use some of that (MC and a snobby girl [aka Sheryn Slade] are always at each other’s throats).…[Read more] -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
Gee guys, @kate-flournoy , @daeus , and @bluejay , I should have applied to you sooner! Thanks:) I can feel my creative juices being stimulated already.
I’m glad y’all like my poem. I liked it when I wrote it, but by the time I was done editing I wasn’t so sure anymore, you know?
Do y’all like the way it reads with the punctuation I chose?…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
:O Sarah!!! So this is the kind of friend that I’m emailing with?!? *Faints* 😛
@overcomer I do love the beach. You make me wish for summer all again. We are into our first month of autumn and heading for winter. 🙁 (And my birthday 🙂 )
@kate-flournoy A wise move. I shall endeavour to do the same. -
Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy Much sneaky. Very devious. Don’t tell Reagan. 😛 😀
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Thanks, @spradlin , (excuse me while I get some sand out of my ear. I just spent the afternoon at the beach. Isn’t Spring great?) and @kate-flournoy ! That is reassuring.
Now I’m also wondering if posting our content here to share with each other could be considered a prior publication (disqualifier) for other sites’ contests etc. I…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
Here, you can read it for yourselves. @writefury , @daeus , @kate-flournoy
Any name ideas or editing ideas are welcome!
Clickety-clack,
New and black;
Click-clack-ding!
And the paper rolls back.Letter then letter
Line by line,
White paper is marred
By a black ink design.Clickety-clack,
Old and rusted;
Years have passed
Since last it was…[Read more] -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
Here, you can read it for yourselves. @writefury , @daeus , @kate-flournoy
Any name ideas or editing ideas are welcome!
Clickety-clack,
New and black;
Click-clack-ding!
And the paper rolls back.Letter then letter
Line by line,
White paper is marred
By a black ink design.Clickety-clack,
Old and rusted;
Years have passed
Since last it was…[Read more] -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
Here, you can read it for yourselves. @writefury , @daeus , @kate-flournoy
Any name ideas or editing ideas are welcome!
Clickety-clack,
New and black;
Click-clack-ding!
And the paper rolls back.Letter then letter
Line by line,
White paper is marred
By a black ink design.Clickety-clack,
Old and rusted;
Years have passed
Since last it was…[Read more] -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic It's Just a Little Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Sweet! @kate-flournoy I totally enjoyed this! It felt like an introduction or ballad from a novel, and a very exciting one too. I must say, I expected something cliche, but was surprised as I read to find that it never went there. A little corny, yes, but done right, if you know what I mean.
I agree with @hope that you should work on “The…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Beginnings make readers— endings make fans in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy I don’t know. It might cost you an arm and a leg.
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