@kate-flournoy
Active 8 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Contemporary Western Novel in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
So, I’ve been reading through your novel and I’m really liking it so far. I’ve read a couple of the comments the other guys have made on here as well, but I haven’t read all of them, so my apologies if this has already been said before.
I’ve been thinking about Chara’s disorientation and the way she isn’t confident about being able…[Read more]
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Including the gospel without being cheesy in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Wow. You just clarified the subject a lot for me.
I thank thee, O wise king of the KeePers, for imparting thy knowledge upon thy humble servants.
😉
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
*shrugs* Nope! Don’t really have a preference, I’m just here to enjoy the ride. 😉
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Ingrid posted an update 8 years, 5 months ago
Happiness can be found even in the darkest of times if one only remembers to turn on the light. ~Albus Dumbledore
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder Thanks so much. ❤️
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Ben Powell replied to the topic The School Bully in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
@dekreel I agree with @sam-kowal on the motives of a bully.
For a not-cliched bully, here are some ideas:
- The bully is actually very intelligent and uses that fact to bully others (maybe his parents think he should stop reading and such all the time and learn how to do something “useful” instead, so he bullies less intelligent kids to make him…
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira Thank you!
@rochellaine Thanks, friend! And yeah, I am playing Ella in Cinderella. 🙂 It’s probably the most challenging role I’ve ever done.
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Joy started the topic The School Bully in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
*appears out of nowhere*
Greetings, Kapeefers! I’m going to peak my head out of my hiatus for a second to ask some questions:
In my children’s books, I have a school bully, and lately I have been considering giving him a bigger part of my books. So my questions are: What are the motives of a bully? What are the literary cliches of a bully? And…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@valtmy @rochellaine @skredder @seekjustice @ethryndal
Hey, guys. Two things: 1) Could you keep me in your prayers this week? I have practice late every night for a play that I’m in and performances Thursday—Saturday. Please pray that I can stay on top of schoolwork and everything despite being dead tired.
2) My aunt and uncle have been in c…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Anyone here? I’m writing.
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Daeus replied to the topic Lots of Crazy Keapeefers in the forum Poetry 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira 😀 Great work.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
I have a few questions after reading your document about court procedure:
Does the defendant/accused/Justice defend himself or is that done by the barrister?
Does the prosecution or the defence go first?
And where does the defending of or by Justice go? before the prosecution? after it? something else?
So far, I think those are…[Read more]
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Lots of Crazy Keapeefers in the forum Poetry 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira XD So good! Magnificently well done.
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Nice first part! I like B-bot. I will get that on the Compendium. 🙂
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Welp, I’m signing off now. got 707 words written.
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Alia replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira, thank you
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Alia replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal, you’re back!
@rochellaine, still praying. keep us updated
hey y’all, I have a prayer request.
A friend of mine is in a difficult situation with her home life. I don’t have permission to go into detail, but it is really hard for her and her family. So if y’all could pray for protection and reconciliation for her, it would be great.
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Alia replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x, MORE KPA!!!!! Fantastic!
I personally think that short beginnings are the best. (if written well which this was)
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