Kate Flournoy

I’m on @Daeus. Tag me when you start.

Hm… I’m an artist @sarah-h. I’ll be happy to start helping fill up the topics once you make them. 😉
I think it would probably be good just to start the topics and let whatever other artists in disguise we have lurking around here on this forum gravitate to them and start filling them up.
Maybe you should just start a general topic for…[Read more]

Nice @Faithdk and @Ingridrd— love ’em both! Here’s mine for that one…

She’d not seen his face since the day of the burning.
She’d never thought to see it again.
But there he was. Standing across the street, staring at her. She knew him by his eyes. Even in the black mask and vested uniform of the Patrol she knew those eyes— inten…[Read more]

Awesome! Keep going @bluejay— I’m rewriting as well. 😉

Okay @Daeus— no problem! 😛 How did you do, @bluejay? I got 700 words.

@Daeus— sounds good! 9:30 then?

Perfect @Daeus— I actually was pretty focused. I liked it. 🙂 You wanna keep going?

Perfect @Daeus— I actually was pretty focused. I liked it. 🙂

@Daeus 537 words. 😀

@Daeus— I’m outlining. ‘Til 8:45?

Oh yes sir @Daeus sir, no breathing fire, of course not, sir, what a thing to say sir, why would you think I’d ever do something like that sir? Of course sir, no breathing fire.

Breathing fire. Hm… *goes off rubbing claws— ahem, hands— together, chuckling thoughtfully* Nope, no breathing fire.

Still, though…

😉

That’s an awesome…[Read more]

No @anna-brie, that sounds just about right! 😀

*bows scaly head contritely, snuffs smoking nostrils* I repent me of my caustic tongue, and crave thy pardon, honorable sir, for thy fright. I am ashamed.

@Daeus @writefury

*bows scaly head contritely, snuffs smoking nostrils* I repent me of my caustic tongue, and crave thy pardon, honorable sir, for thy fright. I am ashamed.

Wait @Daeus— you like that book? Wow. I… I’m just… I never would have guessed. 😛

*cracks claw knuckles, shakes out wings, narrows glowing dragon eyes*

Complain, sirrah? Nay, I did but query as to thy meaning, forsooth. I pledge mine honor, if heretofore thy word in question (verily) hath entered into my knowledge I knew it not, nor, methinks, should be held accountable.
Thus I plead my case to thee, sirrah— mind thy…[Read more]

Wow @zoe-wingfeather… I definitely was NOT expecting to get any potential customers at this stage of the book! 😛 I’ll be sure to tell you, though it won’t be published for quite a while…

Yes, @Daeus— Count of Monte Cristo is the perfect example of reusing plot points and characters. It’s so wonderfully complicated! The only thing I might…[Read more]

@Daeus— Verily, saidst thou? Pray, what is this verily of which thou speakest, brother? Methinks thou dost speak of some… some word of olden times, but alas! I have no skill in the understanding of such antiquated languages… thy ‘verily’ hath quite overcome me…

*claps hand over mouth, smothers hysterical snicker*

Sorry, couldn’t…[Read more]

@Daeus— Verily, saidst thou? Pray, what is this verily of which thou speakest, brother? Methinks thou dost speak of some… some word of olden times, but alas! I have no skill in the understanding of such antiquated languages… thy ‘verily’ hath quite overcome me…

*claps hand over mouth, smothers hysterical snicker*

Sorry, couldn’t resist. 😉

It’s quite beautiful— love the title! A few lines I would change, just for the sake of better rhythm. The first is

Spotlights shine on the scene

I would just replace ‘on’ with ‘upon’. And the last line of that stanza… I’m not sure which would work better, or if either would work best at all. You might try saying something about a ‘dream’…[Read more]