Joy Schmidt

@sam-kowal Good revisions. (And good synopsis in general, btw. These things are hard.)

Possibly, these three revisions could help.

Feastings end – feasting ends.

Only humans farm in the city of Kurr. Dwarfs would rather win glory in the exosuit arena. When food got low in the winter of 1276, the dwarves robbed us of our crops.

The dwarfs are…[Read more]

@Sam-Kowal perfect. 😀

@sam-kowal The idea is definitely intriguing.

As far as the synopsis goes, I agree with Kate that the voice is slightly inconsistent. My main advice though is cut anything you can. Like, “believe me, that tends to curb one’s appetite could be cut. There are a few words you cut elsewhere or phrases you could rephrase to sue less word.

Also, I…[Read more]

@Sam-Kowal ooh I really like it! Super cool concept. I think I’d definitely pick it up and read it.

On a more writerly note, the synopsis itself is well written, but it does seem a little choppy in places. It may simply be a case of too many fragments. Also, this is bugging me a little and it’s probably just me. But the voice is inconsistent……[Read more]

@JoiseBeth Welcome to KP! Mere Christianity is great. 😀

@dekreel Too true. And XD @michael-stanton ‘s

@jane-maree Ah, yes. Your screen must exceed the length of the image. I went ahead and tiled the parallax images.

@Daeus looks great. The only thing I noticed is a typo at the very end— in the money back section, you said ‘every’ when you meant ‘ever’. Other than that, it’s lovely. 🙂

@Jenwriter17 my word I love that beginning! It’s so intriguing and definitely catches my attention. *applauds* Good job. 😀

@Daeus it looks pretty good! My only thing would be that in the sections that you have images (the ‘contents’ and ‘are you serious about your writing’ headers) it would look better if the images would automatically fit to the length of the screen. For example, I have quite a wide computer screen so there’s about an inch of a gap between the edges…[Read more]

@Catwing I 10000% second the suggestion to check out Katie Grace’s blog. She’s an epic person, and her posts are always amazing. <3 <3

I would suggest starting off with just one post a week. I usually do two, but it does take a lot of commitment to get out two posts every week. Start small and build up. 😛

@kate-flournoy

Possibly up your alley.

@joisebeth Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!

*hands you cloak and dagger* You are now an official KeePer.

@devastate-lasting This is so cool! I love the concept– I wish I weren’t so internet paranoid though. XD

@catwing Basically, post about what you love–don’t fake it, because otherwise people won’t like your stuff. Trust me, I know. Just post what you love, and love your blog.

If you want to see what I post, my blog link is also in my signature.

@jenwriter17 So cool! Where did you find your pictures?

I made some too. Hehehee.

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@clairec That…just… HAHA!