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Daeus replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper If the problem is just that your story seems too dismal, make sure there’s always an element of hope mixed in with the chaos and strive to focus on your characters’ yearnings/ambitions that drive them forward. If you’ve got that all down, I bout your story could be too dismal. Problems tend to intensify stories. It’s only stories…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 6 years, 9 months ago
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Snapper started the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
Alrighty, guys…
I could use some help on this front. I’ve learned pretty well over the past few months how to show and not tell, but I actually am using that too much.
Don’t get me wrong. Always show over tell, but my problem is that I’m focusing way too much on the emotion. And Ike… Zelaya, they’ve all gone dismal.
How do I refocus my…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Out of season NaNoWriMo update in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@hannah-c HANNAAAAHH! Hi and welcome back!
Ooh, yikes, I’m so glad you’re okay. 🙂
Comical autobiography… that sounds hilarious. 😛 Is it about you?
Up to?
Up to much mischief, my dear friend…
I finished my third novel, working on the fourth now. Also started a blog, the link of which you can find down there in ze signature.
I also…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 6 years, 9 months ago
@sam-kowal *cracks knuckles* @daeus I had to tag you too. XD
Challenge accepted. Raspberries. Go.
Frozen Raspberry
Bland,
And the gray of night,
Shivering hands.
No light.
I couldn’t fight,
Tasteless.
I couldn’t write…
Numbness.
Why?
A question…
A question for the sky.
Of this evil infection?
Why the gray,
Does…[Read more]
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Corissa Maiden of Praise replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
*when you should be studying for your Philosophy exam but would rather laugh at other Keepers’ insane awesomeness*
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 6 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine I’ll play it by ear. I like writing poetry, but I might be swamped this week.
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 6 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine Ha! That made my day.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@jenwriter17 Me too. Catch you later!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@skredder That’s great! 😀 Might see you later then!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@jenwriter17 Oh that’s right. You said that just up there… *facepalm* I must be blind or something. 😛
Anyway, I’m working on copying these accumulated sticky-notes ideas into a notebook, then I’m going to write my novel. 🙂
@skredder Welcome!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@jenwriter17 Yay! What are you working on?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@jenwriter17 You still there?
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Snapper replied to the topic Hiya KeePers!! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
I also like C.S. Lewis and J.R.R Tolkien, although I haven’t read them in a LONG time.
Oh, and D.G. Snapper X)
@dekreel You just put me next to C.S. Lewis and J.R.R. Tolkien. O.O <3
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Snapper replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel This is awesome! 😀
“Well, I’m sorry about that… Or am I?”
Thing is, I’d probably say that. 😛
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Daeus replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel I love it. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@Dekreel sweet. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Hiya KeePers!! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
@ashlyvye Oh, there were others when I joined. I showed up just in time to crash their party, and now they’ve made me king. How cool is that?
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Daeus replied to the topic Hiya KeePers!! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
@ashlyvye Haha! Well, I’ve been on the forum since the day it started so they just slowly accumulated over time. Plus, I used to be super active on here. (@that_writer_girl_99)
I’ve read the Mistborn trilogy and The Way of Kings. I’m not really sure which one I like better.
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Snapper replied to the topic Be in Our Newsletter!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 *bows* *hopes the links work*
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