Cloaked Mystery

@ellette-giselle

why Nico left, where is the baby from the prologue, who are the two different groups here. I know you have hinted at it a little in the prologue, but I’d still like more back story and more info. I tend to be a little more like Tolkine in writing, as in, I have a backstory for everyone, and most of the time, %60 percent of the b…

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@jonas

I have mostly positive things to say actually lol! The way I phrased that did sound a bit scary, sorry!

You’re good…I also tend to overthink a lot and assume the worst in situations 😂

I’m excited to hear your thoughts!

@highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle

Yeah…oops!

I fixed that in the platform I write on (it’s called Reedsy), thank you for catching that!

@ellette

The reason that I accidently changed that to Selena is because I changed that section a LOT. I just came up with the idea to have their names be changed recently, because when you turn to…[Read more]

@jonas

That’s so great! I know you were having some hard times recently, and it’s good to hear that you’re doing better!

Yeah…spiritual warfare is a real thing!!!!!!!! But now I can see that God is always fighting for me, and I’m never alone!!!

I didn’t feel like that at all! There was a point when I wasn’t able to keep up, but that was just…

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@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom (sorry to tag you again but this needs to be said)

Y’all….I just scrolled through the first 14 pages of this…

I owe you guys BIG TIME! Like you put up with me, a new, confused, emotionally unstable writer and helped me SOOOO MUCH! Words can’t describe how thankful I am that you three were there…[Read more]

@grcr @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @acancello (I’m still going to tag you until you come back) @anyone-else

See above post ⬆⬆⬆

@jonas

Yeah, good point. LOTR should be in the middle, at least from what I know of Mistborn.

@jonas

I was expecting LOTR to win as well. If we can’t do both Wingfeather and Mistborn, I would say go with Wingfeather, since at least 3 people haven’t read Mistborn, and I think everyone has read Wingfeather.

@jonas

If a zip is a real thing, I don’t know about it. A zip is like a type of speeder, but only meant for one person. Most speeders in my writing are built for two or more.

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas

It is set in my sci-fi galaxy, which in that world is the same as our universe, but at the same time, I don’t believe in life on that planets or in other galaxies. Sorry, it’s confusing, but once you figure it out, it makes sense.

The reason I didn’t go into much of the sci-fi stuff is for one, I don’t lime to focus…[Read more]

Tagging more people! @linus-smallprint @theshadow @jonas @lydibug @savannah_grace900 @highscribeofaetherium @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @esther-c @smiley @princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 @anyone

@loopylin

Um, I’m not sure, lol. I think I’ll ask everyone later especially if the sibling dynamic seems to be popular

@jonas

Yeahhh, that was my bad, lol. I should have just split it into two questions. XD

Imma just go ahead and tag everybody again…

@theducktator @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @freed_and_redeemed @smiley @whalekeeper @theshadow @mineralizedwritings @grcr @rae @loopylin @acancello @keilah-h @hybridlore @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @thearcaneaxiom @everyoneee

Welcome peoples! If you don’t know what this is abo…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas

I’m not against trying, but I do think it’d be better if we just kept it HF.

@jonas @esther-c

I think if we combined them It’d just become steampunk.

@jonas

Yeah, I’m not that familiar with steampunk too, but it sounds fun, lol.

Yeahhh, I’m not sure how we could mix those two together. It’d end up being very interesting though! XD

@theducktator

*sigh* Jonas is right. High fantasy did win. (I kinda wanted it to be steampunk… XD)

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @ducktator @grcr @loopylin @rae @whalekeeper @anyone-i-might-have-missed-sorryyy

Alrighty! The final count is in!

High F…[Read more]