Cloaked Mystery

@jonas

Whoa. That was really interesting. Great job!

Mind if I ask if there is a moral of the story at all?

@jonas

Wow 😮

@jonas

 I’ve never read a first person novel with multiple POVs, but that’s not to say they don’t exist.

Oh, that’s funny! I’ve read WAY more first person novels with multiple POV’s. i’ve read more of those than third person POV’s.

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium

So with my revision of my WIP, I’m changing things a little. I’m thinking of writing it in first person now. I started writing yesterday, but now I’m stuck! How should I continue?

Also, is there anything I could improve on?

(Am I changing things too much?)

Chapter 1

The world is a dark…[Read more]

@jonas @savannah_grace2009

I can go.

@jonas

Somehow, I am going to force Ellis and Ottoline to get along. hehe. 😈😈😈

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @everyone concerned with this RP.

Nahim

Nahim groaned as he stirred, his head feeling like it was split in two. He tried to remember what happened.

“Good morning.” Someone said, Nahim didn’t know who.

With a flash, the memory of Zahlin entered his mind. Oh how could Nahim have been so stupid to get distracted by…[Read more]

@jonas @rae @highscribeofaetherium

I think the groups look good… Kari gets along with most people so finding a particularly conflicting partner for her would be hard. Plus my schedule’s busier so it’s probably better if she has a role that’s not super important at the moment. I might have a chance to pop on here tomorrow morning before I leave…[Read more]

@jonas

Don’t worry. I have a plan brewing.

@jonas

Lol exactly.

@jonas

Nahim would be set to the forges. Ellis sent to train others. So on so forth. Fennin plans to set the pairs to work on different things so they can get going to save Lillen sooner. Also, it gets them working on strong points.

@highscribeofaetherium

Don’t worry about Zahlin and the forging, Nahim understands and respects vows, his culture…[Read more]

@jonas

You have literally no sense of humor if you can’t even tell when you say something funny.

And yeah, he could.

@jonas

Also, I’m not an expert on metal working, but I don’t think that swords start out sharp,

Lol I don’t know whether to be insulted or amused.

@jonas

*shrug*

Nahim is the only one who knows how to use a forge, but Zahlin would literally be useless at that…

Although I guess Fennin doesn’t know that Zahlin can’t touch other weapons…

@jonas

Fennin would assign teams at the Council, after breakfast and possibly after something else too if I’m still not back tomorrow, and you guys get bored of breakfast.

@jonas @rae

Should we start the next day, or wait just to make sure nobody wanted to add anything.

To me it didn’t seem like any of the characters would really have anything to do, so…

@jonas

Well, doing some pairs as perfectly harmless might result in less chaos. I mean, we just paired two almost-enemies (Nahim + Zahlin) together, so we’ll already have enough problems.

@jonas

Not immediately, but probably pretty soon?

@rae

Ok 👍

@jonas

Idk.

@jonas

Okay, that works.