@jonas
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @loopylin
In the mood for a Chase snippet?
Snap. The tiny sound caught Chase’s attention. He turned, pulling the brim of his ranger hat down so that it blocked his eyes from view. “Come out.”
Kat, knowing she was caught, slowly rose from her poise in the brush. “Hi, Chase,” She greeted him sheepishly.
“W-what do you th-t…
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Andrew replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
The writer sat back in his chair and sighed. That’s a start, but where to go from there? He scratched his head. After contemplating for a little while, he took up his pen again. “God’s love is great and wonderful, it saves the soul of everyone who believes. This is a story about one who felt that love, the greatest, deepest love. Our main…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I’ll think I’ll add Jenny with Baron.
XD
@loopy @Andrew
Baron (Brutus)—with Felicity’s band, Elderstrand
As Brutus lept to another rooftop, his peripheral vision caught movement. He slightly slowed, seeing a braid and the edge of a tan skirt as someone tried to hide behind a corner. He halted, before leaping down…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Read the first post on this topic so that you can get the rules.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Whatever the case, Leon was secretly glad he was gone.
I was honestly not expecting that.
Is Baron really that bad?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
Awww girlyyy I’m sorryyy <3 I care about you so much and if you ever need to talk to someone I’m here for you <3
I’ll be praying!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Okay hahahaha
I’m just playing around with things at the moment, I’ll let you know what I decide!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Honestly…
I have an idea….
ignore that first chapter lol
I HAVE A PLAN *maniacal laughter*
WHY DO I CHANGE IT SO MUCHHHH lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I don’t know how a four year old thinks hahaha
honestly I had really deep thoughts for a little kid and I have always thought really complex, so it seems realistic to me XDXD
I will work on it!!!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Why thank you 😎
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@anyone-who-is-interested
Chapter 1
Strong hands grabbed at her shoulders, trying to rip her away.
But Sef wouldn’t let go.
Eyes scrunched shut, tears leaking from the corners, she clung to her father like he was the only thing keeping her life together.
In a way, he was.
And now he was leaving.
“Let go, Sef,” her mother said stern…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Crystalized was pretty bad, but I don’t think Dragons Rising is very good, either. I could rant about it, but I’m not going to because nobody wants that :p
I’ll just say the thing that bothers me the most about it is the way they’re trampling over all the lore they’ve already established. The stuff they’re introducing just…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
There are a lot of teens/adults who still follow the show from their childhood.
Yeah, that’s pretty much why I still watch it. Nostalgia, plus to cringe at the recent seasons :p
But maybe we should take this conversation elsewhere before Ducktator kicks us off.
Lol perhaps.
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HighScribe replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh, yes, my brothers and I, we got so. many. Ninjago. LEGOs.
But we took them all apart now for pieces (and because you literally couldn’t walk on our basement flood) so we have, like, fifty ninja heads lying around. Lol.
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HighScribe replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper @linus-smallprint
I didn’t even realize other teenagers/adults even liked that show 😂
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HighScribe replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 5 months ago
(Oh my gosh, I was about to use the middle finger emoji to point up 😭 I am so stupid lol! I never EVER use that emoji and I wasn’t looking so I clicked it and then quickly deleted it 😭😭😭😭)
Oh my goodness 😨😱 that is, like, my worst fear. I’m extremely paranoid that either I’ll do something like that on accident, or autocorrect w…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@raxforge @theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @the_lost-journal
Ah! You all hit me with a snowball!
So I wrote a short story
The True Magic of Christmas
December 25th, 1914.
I dread the date. Usually I would be at home, home with little Henry and Mum, but not this year. I will miss them more than usual tomorrow. Oh, if only this war had never…
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HighScribe replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 5 months ago
Sorry, @the_lost-journal messed up your tag in my post 👆
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HighScribe replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 5 months ago
@the_lost_journal
You guys didn’t even know I was taking a break from KP!
I kind of knew, I saw you hadn’t been very active recently, but I wasn’t sure if it was an ‘official’ break, or if you were just busy. Anyway, glad you’re back 🙂
I love this idea! I think I’ll join, depending on how fast this moves. December is pretty busy for me so i…[Read more]
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