Cloaked Mystery

@keilah-h

yes, actually!!!!!

I think I have a couple more chapters since you last read it!!!

@keilah-h

aw yesss

@keilah-h

I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…

It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3

@whalekeeper

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

Ummmm

Let me think lol

I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

I also just want to know t…[Read more]

LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????

Yeah lol

you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD

The frog wedding is adorable.

I KNOWWWW

YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!

no comment….

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

@theducktator

*Steals your questions*

Please do, Most Esteemed Feathered One. Your abducktion of my questions is an honor.

I would say you can tell if someone is a true Christian by whether they believe the Bible, and how they treat others.

I think that’s a good answer, though what if someone says they believe the Bible, and treat those around…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Ah, hello intelligent being! And I would love to tell you all about my fantasy book I am writing!

Great! If you could point me to where you talk about it, that would be awesome:)

I feel I can be that way too…

Luckily we have the Atonement, so that we can progress and become perfected through Christ

Oh, that makes more sense, is i…

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@the_lost-journal

How do you say Ahava? Uh-hah-vah? I like it (well, I guess I shouldn’t say that when I don’t know how it’s actually pronounced, but it looks like it would sound pretty 😅). If you like it and can’t think of any particular reasons not to keep it, I’d say go with it.

As for Thomas… hmm… is there a certain style/ethnicity of…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hey girl, sorry I haven’t really read more of your WIP yet.  I’ve been pretty busy (which is why I kind of vanished for a few days). I’ll try to read some more and get you some feedback sometime this week.

@loopylin

@anyone what classes do you want to do?

I was thinking about going to Foreign Languages with @koshka but I don’t think I’m going to able to post an RP today, sorry.

@theducktator

I need that mug sooo bad!

Me too. I’ll see if I can find it on Amazon or something. I saw the pic on Pinterest but the link led me to a sketchy website so i didn’t get it. I’ll send you the link if I find it!

 Your profile pic is awesome, by the way.

thx. I found it on Pinterest and I might be slightly obsessed with it XD. It’s the…[Read more]

Cool.

I’m curious to see how far this goes.

Do you know Blades of Acktar by Patricia Mingerik? (hopefully I spelled her last name right)

From what you described, it sounds like it might be similar in some ways to that series (great series by the way. She wrote a wonderful fantasy world without magic)

@the_lost-journal

Hello! It is even more nice to meet you!!!! Also, let me introduce myself! I am The lost journal (something from my main WIP) Also know as my real name Kefa, or my split personality, which is the magic potato! (Don’t ask questions…) I work for the potato army, but have also made a truce with the avocado army!

Tis a pleasure, Pot…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Hi Freedom! I am intrigued. have you developed how these different arcs blend into the overall story? What’s the worldbuilding you’ve done like so far?

@keilah-h

……some of those seem like they were directed at me

Some of them made me think of you XD Especially the Writer Problem #18 one

I laughed though.

and the tiny froggo is pure gold!!

Good, glad you laughed!

And yes, I love that picture! It was a random Pinterest find

also what’s with your signature?

Lol.

So, Andrew and I got in a frien…[Read more]

I hope I made your day a little brighter!

Ehyeh Flora

And finally, something so sweet <3