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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
@theducktator @ellette-giselle
I bet he’s gonna die in the end.He can’t die; I like him too much!
Oh dear…well, two more stories left and then you’ll know. Don’t worry, Baron will be happy with the ending.
 I would love to see this published someday!
Hopefully sometime in Spring I will submit it to a publisher. Fingers crossed though cuz…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I also hope I didn’t come across as rude or brushing you off…I really do appreciate your thoughts because that means I need to work on foreshadowing! And explaining my book to others helps me flesh out my thoughts a little more! Thank you so much! <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot and were put through a lot of physical pain. There’s nothing inherently wrong with that, but it needs to be balanced out with hope. When I got to read those Lilitu/Sef memories from when they were little, that w…
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HighScribe posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
“I was around small children, so I got small children-ed. It’s when you’re around small children and they give you all their diseases.” – Illustration teacher.
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
@raxforge (I changed a few things in the story btw) @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper @hybridlore @theducktator
Story 10!
Only two more stories and then The Baron Chronicles will come to a close. Thx for reading this far! 💜
Fire
The blaze in the fireplace crackled. Baron balanced a pencil on his hand, staring down at his rose drawing on…[Read more] -
RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
… May I ask what’s in Alpha’s pockets?
Alpha’s gonna be so mad lol
- Â A pocket knife (are you surprised lol)
- some loose change
- some random things he picked up like an acorn probably (Strange new world, strange new things, random things in pockets)
- a picture from a couple years back of him and Nar having a flour fight (he lost)
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Alpha’s reaction.
I apologize to Dante ahead of time. I like you Dante, but Alpha is not a fan.
Alpha
Before Dante could get far, he was pinned against the wall in the hallway outside their room, Alpha’s finger’s wrapped around his throat. A red vapor was thinly veiling Alpha’s eyes. “Watch yourself, Dante. You may think you know a…[Read more]
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HighScribe posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
Goodreads keeps telling me that since I read Pride and Prejudice I should therefore read Twilight and I’ve never been so insulted in my life.
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
173 words
Her wide, innocent eyes were of a bluish purple, flecked with white as if some painter had dabbed their brush in white and flicked it with their finger. Then, some magical fairy had come and made all the spots glow like the stars in the sky. Her skin and hair were of similar shades of the bluish purple. Even her little boots…
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay, I wrote 500 hundred words. I won’t post them here though because they’re part of a story I plan to post soon of The Baron Chronicles topic and I really don’t want to spoil what happens in this story.
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RAE replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
(where this super cool person is wearing a mask and then they remove their mask and its a GIRL 😮 nothing against girls being cool, just the trope is over used and I am more surprised when it turns out to be a male rather than a female.)
My least favorite part about this trope is the girl almost always has eyeliner on. Or they’re…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character commissions!! in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m sorry, I finished drawing Rory a couple days ago but I realized I never took a photo and posted it!
Here he is (I think something’s off about his face 🤔 but I hope it looks like him)

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HighScribe replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @anyone
I don’t know if I’ll have anything going on that day (probably not, though) but if I’m free I’ll come!
Ellette, I think I gave you my email, right?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
😱😱😱
Well, when I’m done doing all the snowballs I’ve accumulated I’ll have 44 to throw so I will have ample revenge.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Woah…
Dante has officially been added to Alpha’s possible threat list….
Like what if he needed stitches?
He’s usually okay with getting stitched, if it’s Nar who’s doing it. As far as anesthesia, he declines.
I might write an rp later, when I decide how to write Alpha without making it too dark
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
correct, the priest isn’t forgiving the sins. It is God.
*is confused* If you know it’s God forgiving the sins, then why do you guys go to confession to a priest at all? Why not just ask God?
I’m sorry if that sounded rude…I don’t mean it that way, I’m just very confused and trying to understand.
And about mega churches, my c…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m so sorry, I forgot about this!!!!
I think it’s a new day, so where do you want to continue? XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
are you looking for critiques? Or just posting for fun?
I just wanted to make sure…I don’t want to assume you want critiques if you’re just wanting to share it with us! 🙃
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Saraaaa… 🥹 Girl you’re so sweet.
I’M SERIOUS…I LOVE IT SO MUCH
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