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Andrew replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
So this thing is going to on the character party topic?
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Andrew replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
HECK YEAH!!! I have really wanted to play dnd but I don’t have any friends *sad music*… that play dnd enough. So this is the next best thing!
I have charrie who is a spin-off from another book, but I think he would be great for this.
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Andrew replied to the topic I'd like some thoughts on this scene in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Aaaaaaah! Why are so good at pulling on my heart strings. Good job!
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Ruth started the topic I'd like some thoughts on this scene in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
So…this is a scene that I wrote at like 11:00 last night. It hasn’t been edited so sorry if it’s a total mess.
I’m not looking for any particular things like grammar and such, I’d just kinda like whatever feedback you can give me. Maybe how the scene effected you? Idk. Anyways, this is from Chapter 19…
Ash. Thick and heavy in the air, coating…
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Yeah, thanks!
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Alpha
“What I meant by ‘at bay’ is keeping it under control, as on keeping it from exploding out in a sudden uncontrollable burst. I’ll explain more later. For now, I believe that masked woman is here to ask us some questions.”
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I don’t really understand it. Could you explain more please?
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Andrew replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Lord Quakers and Johnny
LQ and Johnny looked at each other again, the spell should’ve healed him completely from most things, except those of the spirit.
“Tell us, Fern, what powers do you have that may be of some use?”
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Rax and Ben
“I don’t think I really know what you are talking about. I use heat energy yes, but I do not know what ‘at bay’ means. Do you mean by the seashore.”
Ben looked at Rax, “No, no, that is not what he means, he means how do you store your energy.”
“Oh, um, in my heart, I think. But I’m not too sure, could be in one of my kidneys…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Alpha
Alpha raised a black eyebrow, studying Rax up and down as if he had never seen him before. He held out his hand and grasped Rax’s wrist.
“We do do something similar to a handshake. I was simply being rude. I apologize.” Alpha bowed his head. “My name is Alpha Grath. So you’re a fire elemental who also can heal, that means you…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
In Realn culture, you grab wrists, I think I showed you that before, so alpha should have accepted Rax’s hand anyways. He was just being purposefully rude for whatever reason.
I know, but Rax doesn’t know.
@whalekeeper @koshka @ellette-giselle
Rax and Ben
“Does that- you know what, it probably does.” They need all the help they can get. <…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
In Realn culture, you grab wrists, I think I showed you that before, so alpha should have accepted Rax’s hand anyways. He was just being purposefully rude for whatever reason.
he’ll probably apologize later…and he’ll also ask about Rax’s power and maybe even share a demonstration of his if Rax can convince…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@rae @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka
Rax
Rax looked at his hand, he knew it was disrespectful not to shake one’s hand, but he made an exception, seeing how he was from a different culture. Rax sighed, “Are there more like that man who are wanting to kill or do whatever to this girl, Silvia?”
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @ellette-giselle @koshka
alpha
Alpha stood, still not accepting the man’s hand. “Don’t feel sorry about it. I like throwing knives at people, and since you were making comments about possibly being able to save that man if you were there, I figured you somehow knew him, and were after Silvia too. Speaking of the poor girl,…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Lord Quakers and Johnny
Johnny and LQ looked at each other, LQ nodded.
“You are welcomed into the service of the lord. The lord shall heal you.”
LQ stood up and lifted his hands out in front of him. Dark clouds came out of hands and went around the servant, lifting off the ground. Lightning shocked the stranger. The stranger…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@rae @whalekeeper @koshka @ellette-giselle
Rax
He didn’t know what to think. He moved over to Marcel to heal him. “I do believe that you saved that girls life, I am sorry that I judged you. But when you throw a knife at me, someone who just asked to repent, I tend to think that you are arguably someone who kills in cold blood.” He finished…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @koshka @ellette-giselle
Alpha
“I already called them after the man was killed. It surprises me that they haven’t arrived yet.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@raxforge @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka
Alpha
Alpha knocked away the guy’s hand. “Firstly, I didn’t murder in cold blood. The man was holding a knife to that little girl’s throat, so I killed him to save her. If I had murdered him, I would have killed Silvia too, then gone looking for my sister and killed her. It is the sad truth that if…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh I didn’t think we were arguing! I’m sorry if it came across that way.
Yeah, I was arguing, sorry.
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
You’re asking that like you didn’t see the dialog with Rax and Alpha. Rax wanted to know what happened and was wondering if he could’ve helped them if he was there, which he is being a little too hard on himself, but most people are. Anyways, when Alpha made the move to be aggressive, Rax took it as if Alpha killed the man in the…[Read more]
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