Cloaked Mystery

@the-lost_journal

Aww I’m sorry, I get it <3

Hope your day gets better, praying for you!

@ellette-giselle

Roger roger

@rae 😢 ok

@ellette-giselle @raxforge

Good, I mean, bad news. The scanner I use to scan the pictures into the computer isn’t working rn so…no art rn.

@highscribeofaetherium

Okay, thx

@theducktator

Lol, that too 😂🤪

@savannah_grace2009

Very well done scene!

It’s also a major plot twist lol

@everyone

What do you guys think of this scene….

It’s kind of messy but it’s also supposed to be that way, like it’s a flashback…I’m trying to make it a little confusing, but not too much.

When Nami dared to open her eyes, she breathed a sigh of relief.

The men were gone.

Tigin had screamed at her, threatening her with matches and a…

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@the_lost-journal

YAYYYYY you’re back!!!!!

*throws confetti*

@keilah-h
Aww tysmmm

@lightoverdarkness6

Girl thank you so much <333

@the_lost-journal

It’s a weekend camp some people from my church go to every year. It’s in winter, so that’s why it’s called snow camp (though it doesn’t seem like there’s gonna be any snow this year :/). I’m leaving tomorrow.

I’m 15.

I don’t like math so I didn’t care to do it!( ^-^)

I relate to this sentence lol.

Also, your signature is funny.

@rae

Alright! I’ll try to get some feedback to you later today, it might take a bit.

@highscribeofaetherium

Sentenced by sentence would be greatly appreciated.

@rae

I read the first part, and this is great! Are you looking more for a sentence-by-sentence critique, or just overall feedback?

Today if I can.

@jonas

Ok, I’ll try to do something, hopefully before Snow Camp.

@the_lost-journal

lol, it’s alright, glad to have you back 👍

@ellette-giselle

Thanks, you can tell by the following post that I got the reaction I wanted from her, lol

@the_lost-journal

Aw, sorry to hear that mate. Hopefully see you around Lord willing