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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 4 weeks ago
(though the wild one is more Baron-sih to my mind. XD)
Same. Don’t worry, he will keep his ruffled, unruly hair for most of the book. This drawing was supposed to be from his time with Jenna.
It does kinda hover in the area where you know who it is, but it doesn’t exactly look like him because of the hair XD
Thank you!
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel reached up into his hair, untying the red ribbon holding on his mask. He set his mask down on a wardrobe by the bed, sighing. He glanced at Lucy, making sure she slept.
He took off his bag of plundered items, setting the hatchet on the floor, pulling out the scraps of leather, twine, and needle from the bag.…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel caught her, holding her carefully. He couldn’t smell any fresh blood, nor see any. He felt her arms gently, searching for any heat radiating through the bandages, any sign of infection. Finding none, he shifted her so her head rested on his shoulder, picking up her hatchet and few other fallen knickknacks…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel knelt by Lucy. “Tell me what’s wrong. Lucy?”
Idk, what else to write, sorry 🙁
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
That was 100% big brother Gabriel
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Gabriel Mai
As he walked on, Gabriel was internally debating if it was safe for Lucy to have a hatchet or not. When she was carrying his knife, she was careful, but that was briefly. Now she was toting a dangerous little blade with her like a trinket. As they passed through the rooms, Gabriel took some leather and a sewing kit he…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
none of him home monsters look humanoid, so he might not have a kill reaction, but you bet they will be getting death glares at least. He might be a little protective of Lucy…
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
I’m good with anything that happens as long as Lucy stays with Gabriel. She’d be none too happy if they got separated
Gabriel feels the same, though he might have a more violent reaction than her if they got separated. Violent of the “kill everything” type.
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Not that your characters would know this, but, just clarifying, the labyrinth doesn’t have an owner. It’s sort of sentient on its own, kinda, and more like a force of nature than anything else.
Yep! I know, but Gabriel most definitely would assume there’s a person behind this, not a bunch of crazy night owl writers lol…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Okay, glad you’re alright.
Also, I like the poem
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
As Lucy read the poem, the voices grew louder, hissing their jargon in his mind. He wanted to shout at them to stop, but kept his voice silent, not wishing to disturb Lucy.
“That’s alright, thank you. You read much better than I.” Gabriel tried to keep h…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WARS in the forum Plotting 3 months ago
Did you find any ideas for this? It’s totally fine if you haven’t looked yet, but I would love to brainstorm this idea some more!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Ohhh i love it! I agree with Ruth, the prologue is 👌👌👌👌🔥🔥
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Make something up, i literally have as much plan as I did with the piano lol.
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Gabriel Mai
“Yes, I see…” Gabriel walked to a set of drawers in a corner, picking up a book from on top. He opened the pages, a pressed, dried flower falling out, rocking to the floor. Gabriel bent and picked it up, then showed it to Lucy. Purple petals, and a white and yellow center. He put it back in the book, then tried to read…[Read more]
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RAE posted an update 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle This is random, but I just had someone call Baron a babygirl.
Which apparently in this context “refers to a man who is both attractive and charmingly sensitive (or brooding/self-possessed/quirky) as opposed to stereotypically macho.” (Merriam Webster)
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
Thank you…do his earlobes look uneven to you?
I know random, but it’s the typical critical eye after I can’t change anything.
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Finally decided to join.
I’m gonna add Tenz and Reid since they’re highschool age. I did have them in another rp, but I kinda wanna see what happens here. Plus Tenz has healing abilities, and that may be needed the way this rp is going.
Tenz and Reid
Identical twins.
They both have unruly black hair (Tenz’s more so, Reid at least tries to…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel kept walking in silence. Without any information, he could do no more but worry about their predicament. After a time, the hallway opened into another room. Gabriel froze, pulling Lucy back. Lit candles flickered on a table inside the room. Gabriel pressed himself against the wall of the hallway b…[Read more]
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Okay…… 🤣
That’s kind of funny, actually. Though I’d prob. not like it if my character was called that. Not very flattering name. 😂
Btw, how is all that going? Did you find someone to publish it?
I was very confuzzled when they said that. I personally won’t be adding it to my vocabulary but I found it interesting.
I still plan to go with Wild Horse Publishing, if you’ll still have me, however the current thing holding me back is money. I do not have enough saved, and I don’t have a job yet due to health issues.
As soon as I get a job…[Read more]
Oh yes of course we will! Okay yeah, did I give you a price quote yet? Take your time. However long you need is fine.
No, you haven’t given me a price quote, but from what I’ve seen online, it can take up to $2000 to $4000 to publish. I was planning on saving $2000 but I only have $700 right now. Maybe a little more after winter because I do get snow money and I have a few relatives who always send Christmas money because they live too far away to see us, but at…[Read more]
Well, I can tell you right off the bat that it will not be that much to work with us. If you give me a page number then I can give you an estimated quote on what you need to have in hand before we can start.
@ellette-giselle
The reply button had to go to bed apparently.
My doc is currently sitting at 97 pages. I do plan to go through and edit though, since I’ve found some week spots, and also need to clean things up, but it’d be around 100 pages.
I’m sorry if that’s too vague for you, that’s the best I can give until I go through again (I stepped back…[Read more]
lol
yeah no worries. I have to do something really fast, but I’ll get back to you on that in a minute.
So, running that as a mockup, here are the estimated prices to print each book.
Paperback, black and white illustrations—
$3.66 per book (not counting shipping, handling, and tax)
Hardcover with dust jacket, black and white illustrations—
$10.14 per book (not counting shipping, handling, and tax)
Hardcover with printed case no dust jacket,…[Read more]
Woah, that was not the numbers I was expecting.
So, I have the money I guess (the sad thing is it looks like I’ve had enough for months and didn’t know it).
Thank you so much!
About illustrations, I’ll probably do those myself to save on money and capture my vision.
For an editor, I know that I need one of those lol so I’ll get into that.
I…[Read more]
I would have been sad if you didn’t want to do the illustrations! It just wouldn’t have been the same! ☺️
well, i think the time of stepping back will actually help you refine it, so maybe it’s a good thing! We have a few editors working for us, or if you know of someone else, feel free to chose them as well. Here are our editors, but don’t feel…[Read more]
loll this is so funny to me, I’m active in a lot of online fandoms so I hear this term all the time 😂 it’s usually used for well loved characters or people so please consider it highest compliments
LOL.
Bro what—
Oh I would hate it if someone called my characters that lol
(Given that most of my charries are from fanfics, there’s a very high chance someone already has.)
Lol. I don’t like the term itself, but I find it flattering that someone used a term that meant that about my character because it shows affection.
That seems like a pretty broad category to be fair, lol, unless the character has to be obviously sweet/sensitive/vulnerable in order to qualify. But that’s still funny.
Oh no…
I just realized Hugo is textbook “babygirl”
I am ruined
Lol, he is totally.
If his girlfriend called him babygirl, he’d probably just shrug it off. That’s how textbook perfect he is for this term. I’m not sure whether to be fine or not fine with this.