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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, Dawnshard is the book (although I haven’t read it heh heh. I just don’t really care about spoilers from the Stormlight novellas) that gives the most information about the organizational aspects of the Shards. Even there there isn’t that much. Most of what we know isn’t stated, but can be deduced from that book and things…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
There are only nine unmade, however, and ten orders. That doesn’t disprove your theory though, especially considering something you’ll learn early in RoW. That is an interesting observation. I didn’t think about that. Perhaps there is a tenth spren that never became an Unmade.
Unity is not the confirmed one, but you’ll find ou…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
How are all of the Heralds lives connected, and what was special about the blade that killed the Herald of Kings?
Speaking of the Heralds, I’m pretty sure that by the end of RoW, all of them will have made an appearance. (Not a spoiler, cause for most of them it isn’t obvious or even confirmed.) So keep an eye out for the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
That is a very important point. It makes sense that seeing the future isn’t necessarily a corrupt quality, as that’s a shared ability of all the shards as far as I know. Yet the spren is corrupt regardless, so they assume that’s what tells him the future, but there’s definitely a lot more going on.
So the weird thing is, Brandon…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Here are two interesting tidbits I’ve been speculating on. See what you think.
In one of the cabinets in Urithiru, a gemstone message from an ancient Truthwatcher says “I foresaw this.” That’s not the whole thing, but it’s the important part.
Secondly, what about that part when sodium screams “WE KILLED YOU”? Who is ‘we’?
I h…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, I will add some more details later, but I don’t feel like redoing it at the moment.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
I have been meaning to post in this forum for a while now.
I mean, I would assume it’s Ottoline’s, since her picture is on it… Oh, wait XD it’s Ottoline and Hugo!
I was like, wait why are there skateboard pictures there?
Here’s what I would do with those eyes.
- Copy everything around the eyes, but not the eyes…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Huh. That was nice. I typed up a whole big question, and when I tried to submit, it said “You’re not logged in” and DELETED everything I wrote! I’m not going to take the time to write that all back up, but basically, I was wondering if anyone has any tips on plotting? (I might take this to the plotting forum too.)
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ellis
“She’s wounded, Fennin. She got stabbed. I don’t know how it happened. I wasn’t there. She seems to be in a stable condition.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Uh oh. @calyhuge it appears that a perfect opportunity for Styx to escape has just appeared.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
The climax felt felt like a continuous streak of mind-blowing unfolding and action.
Yeah, the way that it jumped between perspectives worked really well. A movie version of this scene would just be incredible!
What do you think about what’s happening with Renarin? That was one of the most surprising reveals in my op…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @princesschronicle22
Woohoo! What did you think? Oathbringer is my favorite climax.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, I could tell it was something like that.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @calyhuge
Ellis
Ellis and Zahlin headed down the passage. Finally, they saw a group of four people: Fennin, the two strangers, and the imposter, Styx. Fennin was speaking:
”…I don’t need any imposters under my command.”
Ellis put his hand on his sword in case Styx tried anything.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ellis
“Yeah. Kate, Nahim, and Nora are fine. The Queen is injured. There’s also an imposter Lillening on the loose being chased by two sixteen year-olds.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ellis
Ellis sighed, sheathing his sword as the monstrous Jep retreated.
He turned to Zahlin.
“You good? I’m looking for Fennin. Have you seen him?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ellis
Ellis tried to correct his course mid-jump, which resulted in him landing awkwardly and stumbling into the wall. He rolled away as the monster tried to attack him again.
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