@jonas
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @theducktator @loopylin @grcr
Thanks for the feedback! So far, it looks like the popularity ranking is:
- Chromancy
- Spectrachromy
- Prismathurgy
- Spectrathurgy
- Spectralurgy
With the other three having no votes. I’ll take this into consideration.
As some have guessed, this is a color-based magic system.…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Okay, so I think the way I want to do this is, I’ll give you a list of some of the options I’ve come up with, without comment, and you tell me what you like. I’m also not going to tell you what this magic system is about (though you can probably guess some of it from the names.) After I get some feedback, I’ll give you more context. Right now, I…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Super creepy, but interesting! Is this the entirety of the story, or is there going to be more? Either way, the mystery remains effective: if there’s more, than this is effective for piquing the reader’s interesting; if not, the questions it leaves unanswered are intriguing in and of themselves. I also liked your use of repetition.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
So, question. Is there an RP on here that I could randomly stuff some characters into, or is now not a good time?
Well, as @hybridlore alluded to, there is the character adventure RP. You would be totally welcome to join, although the it has been pretty much inactive recently. (Also, in case it would affect you, we do have a c…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I haven’t gotten any further, sorry. It slipped my mind, and then school hit and I don’t have much time each week. You can keep tagging me though, and I’ll read more whenever I get more time.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
@the_lost-jourmal
A framing device is basically a story outside of the main story. It’s not necessarily a “story” as far as having much of a plot, but it acts as context in which the main story is told.
The only example I can think of that you might have seen is the Princess Bride movie. In that movie, the grandfather reading the story to the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
That does sound like a really fun idea!
So, are you thinking of this being like a framing device for a collection of other stories or something?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 6 months ago
G, P, X
(Judith is totally a vandal.)
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@the_lost-journal @highscribeofaetherium
Rina – Elderstrand, Deepwater
There were people overboard. Rina created a portal in the water, with the other end in the air above the ship. She had, unfortunately, forgotten to account for water pressure. A stream of water crashed into her, throwing her backwards as water flooded through the portal.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I also have been busy lately. (I’m back at college this week.) I know it’s been a while. I’ll write something next time I have enough time to do so.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Scrabblers. Yeah, they can climb.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
What is the difference between the brain and the mind’s aspects?
That distinction is fuzzy in universe, intentionally, because I think it’s also fuzzy in real life. The best distinction I can give is that the brain is purely physical (which makes the distinction between physical and psychological aspect a bit fuzzy as well), while t…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Wait, did you just rename yourself to Whalekeeper?
We’ve got an identity thief on the loose people!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@jonas That’s a cool system. So soulforging works on any metal object? Do you have any characters with enchanted jewelry then?
Thanks!
Yes, it works on any metal. I haven’t completely decided yet, but metals might have varying properties that makes some better for certain things, but any metal could be Soulforged in some way. (Of co…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Sure! (Don’t worry, I won’t plagiarize lol)
Okay, then, a crash course on Awakening it is! (Minor spoilers if anyone reading this happens to plan on reading that book.)
So, in the world of Warbreaker, every person is born with one Breath, which on its own doesn’t really do anything. However, you can give your Breath to someone else, at…[Read more]
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