Cloaked Mystery

@rae

Yeah, like I said to Sara, I do get that, but Nedan is so so SO underdeveloped. I would be RPing with little more than a name, a job, and a power. Sure he might develop, but he could become basically anything, and he needs to become a character that’s right for this story. So maybe I will do it some time, (I have considered adding him to sch…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Wow. You (and your sister) are amazing at building worlds!

Thanks! As a disclaimer, this is by far my most unique world.

Yeah, characters definitely drive the plot forward, which is why it’s such a problem that most of them are underdeveloped. Those are good points about internal conflict too.

Anyway, you also said you d…

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@highscribeofaetherium

I did list white. Iridescence is a good idea. I’ve been thinking of having the white one be like that.

@grcr

Thanks, that’s all helpful! A dark red, like burgundy, might be good actually. And I could also try a reddish violet color, because the two purple colors I’m using so far are both more cool purples. (I don’t really like warm purples, so that’s why, but I can’t afford to be picky!)

@highscribeofaetherium

Okay.

@highscribeofaetherium

For me the struggle is with the lengths of the notes and not the note name. Especially with shorter notes, it’s often hard for me to tell.

@princesachronicle22

I think @HighScribe is correct. It appeared in my notifs, but isn’t here. It should be in your activity though, so you could get it back that way.

@rae

Okay, great! I will warn you that transcribing from sound to written music is probably my biggest weakness as a composer, but if you do post it, I will do my very best. I should be able to figure it out given enough time.

@rae

I’m not very good at coming up with lyrics, but I like what you have. I also write music, so if you happened to need help with that part of the process (assuming you are writing music to go with the words), I would be happy to give advice. It might help if you arranged the words in lines. That would at least help me see it clearly, because i…[Read more]

@acancello

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@thearcaneaxiom

So start making a bunch of words for basic concrete concepts, then bonus points if you can ground those concepts in what is important to the locals where the language originated. After that, combine these concepts in all sorts of ways, again in the manner that would be important to the locals. Then you can add a hint of chaos,…

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@rae

It’s labeled as ‘Ue’ in the picture. ‘Oo’ might be more accurate, but ‘ue’ can make the sane sound. (Think of the word ‘due,’ fore example.)