@jonas
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Rina
“Hmm, yes. Same,” said Rina. “That’s most mysterious, isn’t it?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
…And you already got an answer. (Thanks, KP lag.)
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
So, you can’t exactly respond to one person. When you use someone’s tag (as I did at the beginning of this post) they get a notification. When you do that, it generally implies that you are addressing that person specifically. Does that answer your question?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Rina
“Mm… me neither,” said Rina. “How’d you get here?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Rina
Rina considered herself an expert in magical transportation. Even so, she had to admit it was pretty impressive to be transported to an entirely different world.
This one was very strange. It had a sky, which looked like a gigantic pit above her. Very interesting.
Unfortunately, this place didn’t have any R…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
Welcome to KP! I’m Jonas, more enigmatically known as Cloaked Mystery. I write mostly in the fantasy genre, but usually with hard rules that verge on sci-fi. I like creating magic systems, usually hard ones, but I have a few soft-ish ones. My current project, which I am working on with my sister, @highscribeofaetherium, is a large fantasy u…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@everyone
I may as well introduce Rina now.
Rina

Rina has a power known as the Resonance of Teleportation. It lets her create short range portals and small folded off areas of space, which she uses to store her sword, Sliver. (Don’t worry, this one doesn’t talk.) She also has the generic Resonancy powers or crystal generation and enhanced phy…[Read more] -
Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I kind of want to see Zahlin meet Rina…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ellis
Ellis found himself in a strange town. There was a large palace-like structure behind a wall to his right.
The town looked different from what he was used to, but the atmosphere was the same. There was a war going on somewhere.
Ellis pulled Conviction out of its sheath, looking around warily. The sword surged green in his hands.
That’s o…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I’m just thinking if there may be some way to think about these shell structures that consecutively eliminates some alternating set. I’m sure if you take some time with it, your gonna find a rationalization, but then again, it would likely eliminate elements you want to keep.
Yeah, I could just come up with something completely arb…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
If you want. You joined the most recently, but you could post it in case anyone else joins if you want.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@everyone
I’m keeping Ellis and Kate in, and I think I’m also going to put Rina in because I’ve been having a lot of fun with her in the school RP. I’ll add them one at a time though.
Most of you already know most of these characters, but I’ll introduce them briefly anyway.
Ellis Percaro

Ellis is an Eìvír warrior of Árvendor. He carries the…[Read more] -
Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Okay, great!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Do you have a description for what the town looks like? Last time we only were in the palace, and I wasn’t even imagining any other buildings around.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Btw, should we have them all arrive in different places? I kind of prefer that to having them arrive at the exact same place.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
So have you worked out the themes of each column? You just said there’s a theme of each column, but then talked about the theme of the rows.
I don’t have all the themes decided upon yet. There should be 10 eventually, and I probably have 6 or so right now.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Okay, sure. I probably won’t be on again until later tonight, so just don’t get going too far without me. 😉
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
The issue I would say about using all 29 would be the same debate of how many digits there are in a number system. More digits means more compact information, but it also means more informational storage is needed (you need to remember it all).
29 different metals all with completely unique sets of powers, even if they are…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, I think it also leaves it open ended enough that we could choose to do something else later if we wanted.
@rae @highscribeofaetherium @princesachronicle22 @beth-torres @keilah-h (is that everyone? Our numbers sure have dwindled.)
Is everyone good with that? I kind of feel that we should just start, because we need to…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I just created Scandium’s power: Manifestation.
This allows the piece of Scandium to pull magic energy into a physical form attached to the Scandium. It appears as a glowing white substance with a slight orange-yellow tint. The shape is set permanently after it is manifested the first time. These are used for swords, which are called S…[Read more]
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