Cloaked Mystery

@grcr

I see you said that you may try the other stories… which might be a good idea if you have more to them. Sometimes it seems that when we’re more excited about one thing more than another, the ideas kinda just stop floating/coming. I don’t know if you’re more excited/interested in any of your others, but that’s how it is for me often.

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@rae

Whatever you do, do NOT go with option one! I started writing Guardain Angels before I even knew what plot was, and I am paying for it now! The lack of plot in the first draft means my story bounces all over the place, and trying to tame that and weave my plot has created such troubles that I highly do not reccomend writing a story with no i…

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@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr

Okay, I’ve run into an issue that I should have realized was an issue earlier.

So, when I decided to work on this instead of the Adonial Saga, I thought, ‘I’ve got a fully developed magic system, an interesting and fairly complete setting, I’ve got some charact…[Read more]

“Any sufficiently explained magic system is equivalent to science.” – Jonas (yes, I’m very wise. We can all ignore that this is a not-so clever adaptation of someone else’s saying, as well as the fact that I’ve never said this aloud.)

To start us off:

“If you can’t control your peanut butter, you can’t expect to be able to control your life either.” – Calvin, Calvin and Hobbes

@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @rae

Looking back, it looks like Sara is up next, then me, then Rae. Correct?

@freedomwriter @savannnah_grace2009 @rae

Oh, yeah, I forgot about this RP! Whose turn is next? I can’t remember the order.

@rae

A sentence or word that is the same if you read it backwards.

Another favorite palindrome of mine is ‘Do nine men interpret? Nine men, I nod.”

@rae

‘rats live on no evil star’ is a palindrome.

@esther-c

I didn’t get notified by your tag for sone reason.

I don’t really have much to add. Setting is definitely important, but less so than characters and plot.

I don’t really know what to advise, because I’ve never tried to create a new setting for a story that is already well under way. (I almost always create the setting first.) I would…[Read more]

@rae @loopylin @whalekeeper
Rina
Rina opened a portal and fell through. She hit the ground face first. It hurt. But the masked thing let go with a scream.

Rina sat up as her fave injuries healed. The ugly flesh monster had the snake kid pinned. Rina opened a portal on the ground and threw her sword into it. The sword shot out directly into the…[Read more]

@loopylin

Rina is able to generate crystals from her body, which she can form into blades (which is what she did to the door.) She also generates crystals to enhance the edge of her sword. The sword itself is an ordinary weapon. She keeps it in a pocket space, where she can summon it at will. The crystals crumble and disintegrate quickly after…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Vlydia

“Hmm…” said Vlydia to herself, scribbling down some notes. “So there must be some sort of innate Arcana that collects light for later use.

“What else are you able to do?” she asked, looking up. “I assume it has more uses than creating sparks?”

@highscribeofaetherium
Vlydia
“What sort of energy do you use for that?”

@highscribeofaetherium

Vlydia

Vlydia sighed.

“My name is Vlydiana Hsrinar. The Arcane Arts are my field of study. I would simply like to ask you some questions, for research purposes.”

@highscribeofaetherium

Vlydia

Vlydia noticed a girl leaning against the wall create some sparks of light in her hand.

It didn’t look particularly impressive, but it was probably worth studying anyway. It’s not like anything else was happening.

Vlydia took out a pencil and a notepad and walked over.

”Excuse me. Could you do that again?”

@loopylin

XD

@highscribeofaetherium

Yes 😆