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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
That’s excessive.
These things just happen. Where else am I supposed to put my magic systems? In space?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
(I think at this point I only have, like, two that I care much about?).
Me, with 12: 😐
What’s the second? Ciale?
The floating islands idea (which was the whole main ‘thing’ for Thaliu) I’m not as interested in anymore, so I’m not sure where I’ll go with that (I still like Thaliu, just not sure if I want to rework th…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
What’s Thaliu even like these days? (And, no, it doesn’t matter if this thread gets hijacked. I think we’re done here, for now at least.)
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
lol. I guess that’s what happens when we both read the same book…
Which world was it?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @theducktator @loopylin @grcr
Thanks for the feedback! So far, it looks like the popularity ranking is:
- Chromancy
- Spectrachromy
- Prismathurgy
- Spectrathurgy
- Spectralurgy
With the other three having no votes. I’ll take this into consideration.
As some have guessed, this is a color-based magic system.…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Okay, so I think the way I want to do this is, I’ll give you a list of some of the options I’ve come up with, without comment, and you tell me what you like. I’m also not going to tell you what this magic system is about (though you can probably guess some of it from the names.) After I get some feedback, I’ll give you more context. Right now, I…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Super creepy, but interesting! Is this the entirety of the story, or is there going to be more? Either way, the mystery remains effective: if there’s more, than this is effective for piquing the reader’s interesting; if not, the questions it leaves unanswered are intriguing in and of themselves. I also liked your use of repetition.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
So, question. Is there an RP on here that I could randomly stuff some characters into, or is now not a good time?
Well, as @hybridlore alluded to, there is the character adventure RP. You would be totally welcome to join, although the it has been pretty much inactive recently. (Also, in case it would affect you, we do have a c…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 3 weeks ago
I haven’t gotten any further, sorry. It slipped my mind, and then school hit and I don’t have much time each week. You can keep tagging me though, and I’ll read more whenever I get more time.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 3 weeks ago
@the_lost-jourmal
A framing device is basically a story outside of the main story. It’s not necessarily a “story” as far as having much of a plot, but it acts as context in which the main story is told.
The only example I can think of that you might have seen is the Princess Bride movie. In that movie, the grandfather reading the story to the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 3 weeks ago
That does sound like a really fun idea!
So, are you thinking of this being like a framing device for a collection of other stories or something?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 4 months ago
G, P, X
(Judith is totally a vandal.)
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
@the_lost-journal @highscribeofaetherium
Rina – Elderstrand, Deepwater
There were people overboard. Rina created a portal in the water, with the other end in the air above the ship. She had, unfortunately, forgotten to account for water pressure. A stream of water crashed into her, throwing her backwards as water flooded through the portal.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
I also have been busy lately. (I’m back at college this week.) I know it’s been a while. I’ll write something next time I have enough time to do so.
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