@jonas
Active 6 days, 11 hours ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m sure you can change your vote.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks! That means a lot!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you! Yeah, I don’t think I have shared any actual writing. A lot of world building stuff, but no actual writing. (Oh, yeah, except that short story a while ago. Not sure if you read that one.)
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 11 months, 2 weeks ago
The test was free. The results were not.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Not sure what Arthurian Fantasy entails, but I’ll go:
- high fantasy
- steampunk
- arthurian fantasy
- urban fantasy
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 11 months, 2 weeks ago
???
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Maybe we could organize something similar for KP, where everyone submits a chapter a week. But then again, maybe that wouldn’t be enough. It would probably be pretty easy to tell everyone that you didn’t have enough time, and then get behind and completely forget about it.
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That’s true, but holding each other accountable is a great method. Me and my sister could start trying to do that. We pester each other about writing all the time, but it may actually help to set it up as chapter submission to one another, or something like that.
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Yeah, I found that writing is a lot easier when you have *no other choice.* Since I was expected to submit an outline, and expected to submit a chapter every week, I actually did do those things!
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Yeah, that’s what happened when I wrote my short story. There was a due date for a competition I was entering it for, so that accountability really forced me to Just Do It!
What’s frustrating is trying to have that same accountability on yourself. Even if you set dates, it doesn’t feel the same, so there’s gotta be good ways to convince yourself…[Read more]
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Maybe we could organize something similar for KP, where everyone submits a chapter a week. But then again, maybe that wouldn’t be enough. It would probably be pretty easy to tell everyone that you didn’t have enough time, and then get behind and completely forget about it.
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That’s true, but holding each other accountable is a great method. Me and my sister could start trying to do that. We pester each other about writing all the time, but it may actually help to set it up as chapter submission to one another, or something like that.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh, wait, I forgot about this tactic:
Google doc: h ttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1w_TDIfhF5atyi6gn4zhh3rudnxWtULjnj06LWehEO0g/edit?usp=sharing (delete the space after the ‘h.’)
Take that, Wyoh!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Are you kidding me, Wyoh, that’s the THIRD time you’ve eaten that link!
Um, let’s see. I’ll try posting it under my status update.
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
(Reposting, because the original was long to the infinite abyss of moderation.)
This is a novella that I wrote over the last eight weeks for my creative writing class. I am quite pleased with how it came out. If anyone would like to give me feedback, or just read it for fun, here is the link (in reply.) Feel free to give me a chapter-by-chapter…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 11 months, 2 weeks ago
*facepalm* so much for being dramatic. The post is ‘pending moderation’, because I put a link in it. From past experience, that takes a long time (approximately forever), so I’ll have to redo that.
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Cloaked Mystery posted an update 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae @thearcaneaxiom @theducktator @grcr @anyone
Hello, KP! I am (probably) going to be more active, as I have finished all my online classes, as well as blackbelt testing, and piano lessons. Despite not posting much, I haven’t been *completely* out of touch with the KP world. I know some new people have…[Read more]-
*facepalm* so much for being dramatic. The post is ‘pending moderation’, because I put a link in it. From past experience, that takes a long time (approximately forever), so I’ll have to redo that.
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Good to see you again! I haven’t been too active either, more just on and off. KP finally published my short story as well, so that’s cool. I’ll check out the Novella! That’s awesome that you’ve done that!
That’s something I should do honestly, I’ve been banging my head on the wall over writing whole books, that I haven’t considered starting with…[Read more]
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Yeah, I found that writing is a lot easier when you have *no other choice.* Since I was expected to submit an outline, and expected to submit a chapter every week, I actually did do those things!
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Yeah, that’s what happened when I wrote my short story. There was a due date for a competition I was entering it for, so that accountability really forced me to Just Do It!
What’s frustrating is trying to have that same accountability on yourself. Even if you set dates, it doesn’t feel the same, so there’s gotta be good ways to convince yourself…[Read more]
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Maybe we could organize something similar for KP, where everyone submits a chapter a week. But then again, maybe that wouldn’t be enough. It would probably be pretty easy to tell everyone that you didn’t have enough time, and then get behind and completely forget about it.
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That’s true, but holding each other accountable is a great method. Me and my sister could start trying to do that. We pester each other about writing all the time, but it may actually help to set it up as chapter submission to one another, or something like that.
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Wow, dramatic.
One question: WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH JONAS?-
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Jonas is never this dramatic!
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Hey! It’s nice to hear from you again! 😄
Reading your novella rn… -
BRUH UR ALIVE !!!!!
I’m going to get to your novella sometime…I’m kinda busy right now (it feels like I always say that now….ugh!) but I will! -
Oooh, I’ll have to check out your novella!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 11 months, 3 weeks ago
That would work, but everyone would have to be fine having their google profile be visible.
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Cloaked Mystery posted an update 1 year ago
Fear not KP. I have actually not ceased to exist on this planet despite what it might seem. I have simply been burdened with tremendous amounts of work these last months. In two weeks might be more active again, as I will have finished with some things that have been taking up a lot of time.
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YOU HAD ME SCARED
jk jk jk
me too, me too. -
BROTHER! YOU’RE ALIVE!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @anyone-else
There’s a magic system (the one above actually) that’s been giving me a lot of trouble. This is an outgrowth of Metal Bonding, which is now going to be just a part of it. I have a basic grasp of what I want, but the details are really frustrating me. For one thing, I don’t know what I want each…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
The reason for this scene is to show struggle. Nahim has kept to himself a piece of his life that comes back to haunt him every other night for four years. I doubt anyone would suddenly spill it all out. And the disappointment is also kinda purposeful, but since this is the second chapter, it’s not too great.
Yeah, that makes sense, but I w…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
1. I don’t think the scene is too short. I do have to wonder if it is necessary though. It’s hard to say without context, but it doesn’t seem to move the plot forward really. I also would consider that the reader is likely expecting to hear Nahim’s backstory and feel like they’re being cheated out of it.
2. No, I think it’s fine.
3. Yes. I…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Worldbuilding Mash-up RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@everyone
So, I’m thinking that we should have a layout something like this:
- A “main” area, like a city that has different sectors for different worlds, plus maybe some mixed areas. This will help have a focused location for things to happen in.
- Any world aspects that don’t make sense in a city can exist outside somewhere.
- Other cities…
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Jonas is never this dramatic!