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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
To be fair, ‘Character Party’ was named before it became a fantasy adventure.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009
Whisp
Whisp descended into hysterical laughter. This situation was all so very funny! Then she saw Krenna, Loop, and Ops walk around the corner. She gulped.
Krenna
Krenna rounded the corner to find three people–well two people, and Whisp. Krenna raised an eyebrow at her, and Whisp seemed to wither…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
So this is essentially a Naln and Szeth character.
(I’m assuming you meant ‘Nale’? I think you combined ‘Nale’ and Taln.) Yeah, I think it might have been largely subconscious on my part, but I definitely see the similarities. What I find intriguing about my character is the differences from Nale or Szeth. The scene is obviously…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @rae @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hanako @acancello @hybridlore @anyone
This is a short story I had to write for my creative writing class. I thought I’d share it here as well. I’m not necessarily looking for feedback–I got plenty already–but if you have any thoughts, feel free to share them.
Blade of the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
I haven’t had time to read it yet, but one thought that immediately comes to mind is, if you’re still doing multiple POVs, is first person perspective the best option? I’ve never read a first person novel with multiple POVs, but that’s not to say they don’t exist. I’m mainly wondering if you had a specific reason for changin…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Lol
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2099 @highscribeofaetheriun
Whisp
Whisp laughed, though nobody could hear her, since she was still invisible, as the man started walking down the hall, talking to himself.
“I’ll be ruined!” he moaned, “No one will be afraid of me anymore…and I’ll be a failure!” He dropped to the floor and started wailing.
Whisp burst into la…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Idk. I’ve gone twice already. @highscribeofaetherium hasn’t gone at all.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Ellis
Ellis woke up feeling surprisingly refreshed, despite being attacked with pillows twice.
He sat down at the table, across from Nahim. Kate appeared a few minutes later and sat down to his right.
“So,” said Ellis, “what do you suppose we’re gonna do today?”
“Probably get in another fight,” yawned Kate, “judging by your track reco…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
We could have the first dragon be like that, because they don’t only have to fight the leader dragons. Maybe it could even be one that the Lillenings captured for them to practice on, lol.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
You have literally no sense of humor if you can’t even tell when you say something funny.
I literally have no idea what you’re talking about.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Should we start the next day, or wait just to make sure nobody wanted to add anything.
To me it didn’t seem like any of the characters would really have anything to do, so…
Yeah, we’re going on, whether people like it or not lol.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
The trick is getting Zahlin to acknowledge the existence of said vows.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Lol I don’t know whether to be insulted or amused.
So, you’re saying they do? Why would you be insulted? Or amused? He can still do non bladed weapons though.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Okay that works.
You said other bladed weapons. He could do spears or something. Also, I’m not an expert on metal working, but I don’t think that swords start out sharp, I don’t see how they could, in which case he’d be fine.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, okay. I kind of thought that they were intentionally being put in antagonistic groups to force them to work together, but I guess Fennin would have the same problem we’re having, so let’s say:
Nahim – Zahlin
Ellis – Ottoline
Kate – Nora
Snake – Kaine
Kari – Amir
Hugo – Hedieh
That sound good? What exactly will the teams have…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Do you think Fennin should immediately assign the partners though? In that case, we have to decide what they are.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Okay, here are the characters that we’ve paired, and the ones left.
Nahim – Zahlin
Ellis – Ottoline
Kate – Nora
Hugo, Amir, Hedieh, Kari, Snake, and Kaine is still here, even though Min isn’t in this RP right now. It’s an even number including Kaine, so we have to use him. Maybe we can do him with Snake, since…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Okay, I’m good with whatever. Like I said, Kate is probably not going to get along with anyone, except Ellis.
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