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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
As I was copying and pasting the RP into a google doc, I noticed one point where Kari addressed Ellis, but I somehow missed it. I think that would have been a good interaction, so we should make sure it gets into the edited version of the RP. For now, I think we should play it as though they’ve already met if they interact again.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
“Wasn’t asking,” said Krenna, “Anyway, I saw a big ol’ room back there, so I’m gonna check that out. You losers make up your own mind.” She turned back the way she had come and started towards the large room.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
“Lovely sentiment,” said Krenna, “but I don’t need your help. And I don’t care about solving this ‘ghost’ mystery. What I wanna know is what in the depths this place is.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, I keep forgetting he’s there.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
“Hmmm…” said Krenna, sarcastically, “it must have been a ghost.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
I won’t be the only one that thinks of Nale.
I’m actually not very worried about that. The idea of perverted justice, or legality above all, are actually pretty common. There’s also Javert from Les Mis.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Ellis
Ellis glanced across the room at Ottoline. Why did he have to work with her? Well, he wasn’t going to complain as long as he didn’t have to put up with Zahlin.
“Speak,” Finished Fennin,” Tell me. I will not send the unwilling to death, even though it may mean the life of my father.”
Ellis stood up. “I’m not a fan of your methods, prin…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
”That’s too bad for you,” said Krenna, “if you have no use to me, than this conversation is over. But I doubt your completely useless.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I need to turn this into a meme somehow:
“Zahlin would help, I have no doubt.” – Nahim
“Zahlin has no loyalties but to himself and to that sword, he is not to be trusted.” – also Nahim
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
And is it that sixth sense that lets him sense Krenna’s splits? ‘Cause they don’t displace air–they’re completely intangible.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Technically, anyone would feel air displacement as a part of the sense of touch, right? But Glace has an enhanced sense of when air gets displaced?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
what did I miss about teams of two? I see them above, but what are they doing together?
I’m not entirely sure. Nahim and Zahlin will be forging weapons. I guess Fennin will explain it when @rae writes that RP.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
Loop fuzzed away again, though Krenna could still see her, as a man in a mask entered the room. Krenna glared at the girl, grew short crystal blades from her hands in a flash, and then let the crystals disappear.
She turned to the man in the mask. “Finally,” she said, “someone who looks useful.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
Krenna sighed. “Not particularly,” she said, raising her arms which were covered in a glowing yellow crystals.
”This is ridiculous,” said Loop. Then she fuzzed and appeared solidly.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
”Save it, kid,” said Krenna, “I’m not scared of that thing.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
It could be cool if Liren and Adikar could meet in an RP if that would interest you. Kirrtes would probably just want to kill Adikar for the sake of killing him, or get information off him, while Adikar would try to kill Liren for injustly murdering everyone.
Yeah, although in this story at least, I don’t find Adikar particularly i…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
Krenna looked up curiouslt. “Huh,” she said, “nice. Doubt it would seriously damage me though.” She started walking forwards. “Uh, that looks dangerous,” said Loop. “Shut up,” said Krenna, “I know what I’m doing.”
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Note that nobody else would here Loop. Also, Krenna could heal from a bullet wound, unless it…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
“Who do you think you are?” demanded the small, whiny girl. “I’m the one in charge here,” said Krenna, “stop asking questions.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
“I’m asking the questions,” said Krenna, “actually I doubt you have any information that would be useful to me, so whatever.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @esther-c @rae @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h (I think that’s everyone
What do you think about this order of the areas?
Jungle
Cavern
Swamp
Mountain
Sky
Ocean
Desert
Tundra
Volcano
Btw, do you think they should just go straight through each area, or would they go back in between some of them? P…[Read more]
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