Cloaked Mystery

I feel that I’m pretty good with fight scenes, but I don’t know if I can extract any specific advice. I could definitely try to help if anyone ever needs it though. Subscribed.

I think it would be fun.

@highscribeofaetherium

But…

but…

…but they’re mine.

@highscribeofaetherium

That’s excessive.

These things just happen. Where else am I supposed to put my magic systems? In space?

@highscribeofaetherium

(I think at this point I only have, like, two that I care much about?).

Me, with 12: 😐

What’s the second? Ciale?

The floating islands idea (which was the whole main ‘thing’ for Thaliu) I’m not as interested in anymore, so I’m not sure where I’ll go with that (I still like Thaliu, just not sure if I want to rework th…

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@highscribeofaetherium

What’s Thaliu even like these days? (And, no, it doesn’t matter if this thread gets hijacked. I think we’re done here, for now at least.)

@highscribeofaetherium

lol. I guess that’s what happens when we both read the same book…

Which world was it?

@keilah-h

Oh, so that’s what this picture was about:

Why is he dead though?

@hybridlore

Thanks!

No, this one spawned an entirely new setting. I just can’t help it!

@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @theducktator @loopylin @grcr

Thanks for the feedback! So far, it looks like the popularity ranking is:

1. Chromancy
2. Spectrachromy
3. Prismathurgy
4. Spectrathurgy
5. Spectralurgy

With the other three having no votes. I’ll take this into consideration.

As some have guessed, this is a color-based magic system.…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Super creepy, but interesting! Is this the entirety of the story, or is there going to be more? Either way, the mystery remains effective: if there’s more, than this is effective for piquing the reader’s interesting; if not, the questions it leaves unanswered are intriguing in and of themselves. I also liked your use of repetition.

@theducktator

So, question. Is there an RP on here that I could randomly stuff some characters into, or is now not a good time?

Well, as @hybridlore alluded to, there is the character adventure RP. You would be totally welcome to join, although the it has been pretty much inactive recently. (Also, in case it would affect you, we do have a c…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I haven’t gotten any further, sorry. It slipped my mind, and then school hit and I don’t have much time each week. You can keep tagging me though, and I’ll read more whenever I get more time.

@the_lost-jourmal

A framing device is basically a story outside of the main story. It’s not necessarily a “story” as far as having much of a plot, but it acts as context in which the main story is told.

The only example I can think of that you might have seen is the Princess Bride movie. In that movie, the grandfather reading the story to the…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

That does sound like a really fun idea!

So, are you thinking of this being like a framing device for a collection of other stories or something?

G, P, X

(Judith is totally a vandal.)