Jodi Maile

@e-m-trepke

Would you like to go next??

@elishavet-pidyon

Ah, alright! 🙂

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke @power

Everett

Everett worked his jaw as he weighed his options. He was starving and dehydrated, and exhaustion was creeping up on him. Perhaps this was one of those times it didn’t matter whether he could trust people or not. Did he have a choice?

He tried to remember whether he had left a dagger in his satchel or not,…[Read more]

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke @power

Sorry for the late response!!! 🙂

Everett

“Judging from your question,” Feather asked, “you don’t happen to be the castle’s owner or know who it is?”

Everett forced himself to stop glaring at Rinzler and look at the girl instead, but the guy’s grouchy voice still rang through his head– if I hadn’t already re…[Read more]

@emilysf

So … how does this work? Do we just insert things from our characters’ POVs from our own stories? Sorry, I haven’t been on KP in a while, so I’m late to the party.

@annabethkatherinewingfeather

Hey! I love Harry Potter too! Nice to meet you! Around here, I’m known as Tráhia the Minstrel. I write clean YA Fantasy and am currently writing a no-magic medieval-esque story about two princes from different families who are enemies.

Have you ever read Brandon Sanderson’s books? I’m just curious.

Or Keeper of the…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

I’d either choose The Mysterious Benedict Society (cause both its major plot twists were spoiled for me before I read it😢) or the Mark of the Lion series by Francine Rivers. Because. The. End. Of. The. Second. Book. Was. So. GOOD.

Honestly, reading that for the first time was epic.

It’s funny. The books I go into with low exp…[Read more]

@valtmy

Things unchristian directors could do with my book … oh help.

They’d probably try to make out this beautiful, really close, boy-boy brother-like friendship I have into something else … if you know what I mean. And they’d probably cause conflict between that and another friendship/frenemyship one of the boys has with another main boy cha…[Read more]

@issawriter7

Thank you so much for your advice! I found it really encouraging.

@avacoulter

Thank you! I am so sorry I haven’t posted anything for like, 6 weeks … I’ve been in a real slump and kinda discouraged with everything about websites and my writing in general. It’s a but of hard spell for me … I’m at one of those places where I’m wonderi…[Read more]

@emilysf

Wow! That’s such a cool idea!

I wish I could help more but I just don’t know how! I feel like I would need to know more about the twins and how the actual magic system works with the whole “opposites and double gifted” thing.

I’m still trying to figure out how to display the themes in my book, but one of the best pieces of advice I’ve…[Read more]

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke @power

Yay! Another character! Can I have a brief description?? It sounds like maybe another character from the Star Wars universe, but I could be wrong..? Also, I like the mysterious ‘dark past’ vibes!

Once again, I mean no disrespect! I apologize for my character’s attitude, and I think you guys’ charries are awesome!…[Read more]

@emilysf

Well, I guess I shouldn’t say all the secrets, but hopefully more! There is supposed to be a tenth book that I think will be the last one…

Sophie isn’t my favorite either, but I definitely admire that she isn’t perfect. I think that makes her realistic. My favorite character is Keefe! 🙂

Yes! I’m finding out the more I build up a…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh, that’s such a smart idea! 🙂 I’ve heard of Tron before but have yet to actually watch it!

Everett

Their worlds? Different worlds? Several worlds? Different universe? Worlds converging? 

Everett tried to keep up his smirk, but with every word this girl–Feather–said, he felt the corners of his mouth drooping more and more. H…[Read more]

@emilysf

Hmmmm…. I like this topic, first off, because I also have some underdeveloped side characters, so I can relate.

Because of that, however, I may not be the most helpful, but I will try to offer some advice. I also think I remember you referring to this story about the mentor. But I don’t know much more that that so just keep that in…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh! So you write fanfics???? Cool! I’ve never really dabbled in it myself but enjoy reading them! The one about Feather and her sisters sounds really interesting! I thought you had mentioned Rinzler was from Voltron at first instead of Tron and I was like, I’ve never heard of him XD

@emilysf

Yes!!!!!!! I love that series so much! The characters are great and that’s probably the main thing I look for in good stories! And the world is really cool too! I’m so excited/nervous for the next book because all the secrets are going to be revealed and we’ve been waiting for them for a while! Um… I think I’ve been into it since…[Read more]

Bittersweet? Most definitely. Pointlessly tragic? No.

@keilah-h

Thanks! Ooooh! So they are like from some kind of sci-fi world it sounds like???

Yes! I love Star Wars! Feather sounds awesome! I’m so interested in your characters and their story now!!!

Everett

He scowled at the girl blocking his path. Why was she so persistent? If Everett had to guess, her and her comrades were trying to get…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Quick question! Could you give me a brief description of your characters appearances?? I’d love to know more about them. You probably said something some time back but I’m not sure if I can find it…

Also, is Feather a girl or boy? I wasn’t sure so I didn’t really talk too much about them. 🙂