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Skredder replied to the topic MC Issues in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@skredder Oh, you set that up on your profile page. It’s the signature setting.
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Sink replied to the topic MC Issues in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@skredder Totally! Plus, I think it makes characters much more interesting when they don’t always do what’s right, or are even adverse to doing what’s right until the very end of the book. It makes me root for them more, and want them to change.
Btw, How do you put in the little line between your comment and your username? I can’t seem to figure…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic MC Issues in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@sarah-anson Oh yeah, absolutely! He’s been through a lot, being abandoned and betrayed on more than one occasion. I can see him making decisions that benefit himself best because he needs to protect himself from others. Just what I got from his background.
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Sink replied to the topic MC Issues in the forum Characters 8 years ago
Interesting idea, @skredder. I’ll try it out. Kirin is a great guy, but I really don’t want him to have “Hero Syndrome” (As in he does everything right just because it’s right.). And I also don’t want him to be an anti-hero, because it doesn’t fit. So he needs to have enough moral strength to do the right things sometimes, but he also needs to be…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
@jenwriter17 Okie dokie. No problem! 🙂
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Skredder replied to the topic MC Issues in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@sarah-anson The backstory is pretty interesting. As far as Kirin himself: what are his favorite things to do? Does he have a little quirk? Does he have any side talents or hobbies? What is his favorite color? Does he like animals?
If you want to, try writing a short story with him in a completely different scenario. That might help you…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
@jenwriter17 @seekjustice Here is part 9. For the record, this ends on page 44 of 126 that I have already written, only 14,000 of the 40,000 I have done. And it’s not finished yet. If you want me to get you parts I have finished out faster I can do…[Read more]
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Sink replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
Hey @jenwriter17, sorry to bother you again, but would you mind giving me access to all the chapters you have up so far on your book? I requested access for chapter 6 and I’ve read chapter 1, but I can’t see the other ones(forgive me if it’s just something I’m overlooking in Docs, I don’t use them very often, xD). Anyway, happy writing! 🙂
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Sink replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 8 years ago
Ah, I know I just did this, at least last time anyone was on this topic, but talking about my character’s most embarrassing moment was to good to pass up, @daughteroftheking, thanks for just an awesome question. Okay. Here we go.
Kirin: Kirin would rather talk about it, because every time he gets embarrassed it seems to be in front of a bunch of…[Read more]
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Sink started the topic MC Issues in the forum Characters 8 years ago
Hello there Kapeefers! I’ve got an… issue with my main character.
He’s naive. And incredibly stubborn, very hardheaded, and just… kind of boring. I don’t even know why. He’s got pretty fleshed out motivations, hopes/dreams/wants/needs etc, but I just can’t get interested in him to actually sit down and write. I’ve been plotting and writing…[Read more]
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Sink replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
Hey there @jenwriter! I read your first chapter, and I really enjoyed it. And I think I just sent a request to access the rest of the chapters… I’m not sure though. My google account doesn’t like me sometimes. 🙂
Anyways, I really liked the first chapter, and I’ve got a few thoughts if you don’t mind me sharing them.
First, I really liked how…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine Once and for all I am not heartless and neither are you!  Even God kills people when it will glorify him most, and he loves his creation even more than we love our characters!  Its the same way when we kill our characters. Â
Howcome I don’t get a sidekick like Stan or Bobert or Evie?
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Alia posted an update 8 years ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YbMjh7XZezqkHRvlRP9khoomBNQdlZewkADTubmvzzY/edit?usp=sharing
@rochellaine, @ariel-ashira, @seekjustice, here’s the poem. I don’t go into very much, but it is a start
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@sleepwalkingmk @rochellaine I like Sobbin Women a lot.  Its especially funny after researching Roman stuff. 😀 I like Wonderful Day a lot too.  All thier songs are good though.  They have amazing voices!
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine, depends on what I mean by the word early. Early morning? or early for you? in this case its both
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Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine Are you still on?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine Oh my…umm, I like Millie and Adam and Gideon a lot. Â So many of them are funny though! Â What is your favorite song? @sleepwalkingmk you too
Really, Rochellaine, killing characters is hard, but it can be good.
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine, you went to bed early???
I just realized that I only barely answered your question. would you like a more in depth answer?
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art 8 years ago
@catwing I love those!!! 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine BTW, killing characters is not heartless. Â Its good writing. Â I have never thought you were heartless!
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@alia Thats is beautiful! Its also..sad? What home are you refering to?
Its the one I had in China. The parks reference my apartment complex.
It was supposed to be light-hearted, but as it progressed I couldn’t keep it that way
@alia I’m sorry.