@jenwriter17
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Kaya Young replied to the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
Also @notawriter I really love the word “Nextly” 😉
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Joy replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@ariella-newheart Isn’t it?
Goodbye! *Vulcan salutes* #LLAP
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Joy replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@ariella-newheart I love weird families XD
Have you seen just like a general picture of Leonard Nimoy? Look one up. Early warning: It’s really freaky 0.o
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Kaya Young replied to the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel  @jenwriter17  @notawriter @daeus Ok, so here goes… I honestly am not sure what exactly is wrong with my dialogue, it just seems off. Without further hesitation, I present to you some of my conversations:
“You did a really good job with your prayer! Who wrote it again? Daisy paused, her hand hovering over a box of tea boasting a choc…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
*characters
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Daeus replied to the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@kaya-young A piece from your writing would be helpful. Also, I’ve found that when character’s aren’t coming across well, it’s because I don’t have a consistent mental image of them. The different mental images make them act like ten people mixed into one which ends up as chaos.
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17Â Ahh, okay. Wow, I guess this idea did work! I was growing quite unconfident about it
How’s your book coming? (Dystopian, right?)
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Joy replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@ariella-newheart Yeah, I can’t do it either. Wait, is it humanly possible?! I suppose so — I’ve seen Leonard Nimoy do it, whoever he is…
Can you do the salute? I can, but I know several people who can’t
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Joy replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@ariella-newheart I have never seen Enterprise, so I wouldn’t know the episode names XD
But yeah… I don’t like it either. I don’t intend to watch it anytime soon
Have you seen TOS?
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17Â I’m the same way XD
Is this… the first time that a Readers’ Corner meeting actually worked?
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Joy replied to the topic Strong Christian Women in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17Â So… What time will the discussion be? Is there going to be a set time?
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17Â Ahhh, church history… That stuff doesn’t stick to my brain. I don’t know about you XD *pats head (mane?) back*
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Skredder replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@epicaddie2 I’m praying for you! And Happy Early Birthday!! 😀
@daughteroftheking Of course, I’m praying for you!
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Skredder replied to the topic Strong Christian Women in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17 Yes! This sounds great!
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17Â Yep! Trying to make sense of this chemistry book… *squints at periodic table*
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Joy replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@ariella-newheart I mean aren’t there some… undignified parts?
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Joy replied to the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@kaya-young It depends on what your dialogue looks like. If you post a piece here or something, I’d be more than happy to give you some pointers 🙂
Overall, my best piece of advice is to make sure that your characters’ vocab isn’t far-fetched. Especially if your story is contemporary or futuristic. For example, this sentence, “Can we progress…[Read more]
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Kaya Young started the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
My dialogue… has much to be desired. The more dialogue I write, the more I loathe what I’m writing, and I have no clue how to fix it!
So what is your best advice for writing dialogue? Any and all advice, insights, tips and what-not are greatly appreciated!
@jenwriter17  @rochellaine  @notawriter  @ingridrd  @that_writer_girl_99 @any-one…..
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Joy replied to the topic Strong Christian Women in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17Â I’d like to try! I might be busy though
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17Â WAIT! I’M HERE! *groans*
Anyway, I’m here, reading for school, too
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