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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Haha I have many more if you are interested:
This iced tea made with Jeju’s pure green tea leaves provides a feeling of peace and comfort with the scent of plant that can be felt when lying at the center of Jeju’s green tea fields and looking up the sunlit sky.
This iced tea delivers refreshing excitement and relieves daily stress…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I just read the descriptions to my brother, who is a bit of a tea connoisseur, and he enjoyed them too 😀 Truly, Australian tea is boring.
I have no idea what that last one is even trying to say. Whoever wrote that certainly has no qualms about using adverbs.
Also, I’m just imagining you sitting there, surrounded by boxes of tea, typing…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
You have no idea how hard I just laughed at that. 😛
The descriptions on my British teas are not as boring but I don’t think they can beat the “blissful flutter” and “thrill of a first kiss” of the Korean teas. 😛
A real jubilee of a British black tea, crowned with classic flavours of vanilla.
An intensely aromatic tea infused…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Australians obviously have much less interesting tea descriptions:
Our tea artisans masterfully select and craft Madura teas to achieve consistency, cup after cup, resulting in a superior taste, time after time.Â
How boring is that?
But seriously, if you just rewrote that first description a little, it sounds like a really bad romance…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I have another one though the description is not as interesting (and I edited the grammar a little for this and the previous one because that’s what writers do):
One spring day on the village road of Olleh-gil, the cherry blossoms burst with the pink colour thrill of a first kiss. This tea delivers a lovely aroma with a blend of the…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I’ve never come across green tea that smells like grapes. However it does sound interesting (and it sounds like it could be a heroine in a romance novel too, from that description).
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Haha it just smells really good. Like grapes although I have no idea how because there are no grapes in it.
I have no idea who was paid to write the product description on the packaging but it sounds like something from a book of purple prose: 😛
The fragrances of starlit marigolds, lovely pink roses, and lucky cornflowers are…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Hehe, no 😀
Ooh, I like green tea very much. What makes this green tea particularly special?
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
So I’m not the only one multitasking on this forum. 😛
I’m finally back home and brewing a cup of my special green tea and ready to start writing… 😛 Hopefully I’ll be productive today instead of just staring at a blank screen again…
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Well, you know the Christmas child shoeboxes? I’m packing some of those today but I have to start by putting them together, as they came to me flatpacked.
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
???
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Of course. Talking about fictional characters is why we join forums like this right? 😛
I plan to do some writing before service once I reach home. Are you working on anything now?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Hello again! Yeah, sometimes they just happen 😛
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Hey I’m done with my prayer walk. 😀
Ah, SFI/WIIE character discussions again. 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Oh. Well. At least I have a reputation. I usually say “my friend Anisa” and they go “which one is that?” “the one from Maryland…you know, Uncle Bill.”
No, she feels quite sorry for him. After all, we concluded that Kendall had it worse than Zac, because Zac only gets blamed for the things he has done, which is a quite a lot,…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@seekjustice She hasn’t read Stars, so she doesn’t know much about him, but I tried to give her a pretty clear picture of what he’s like. She found it quite amusing. 😉
Actually, the way I describe you whenever I’m talking about your books to her is “remember my friend, the one who wrote the book where everyone dies?” and she immediately knows…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Okay then 🙂
What did your sister think of Kendall? Coincidentally, I was also explaining to my sister how everything was Kendall’s fault.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@valtmy Oh, too bad. I suppose you’re right, and I could understand it better because I have more practice. I got to see it done live once, and that was really cool too.
@seekjustice I’m afraid I won’t be on anymore tonight. I was planning on having a word war with you and chatting some more, but I just got distracted talking with my sister fo…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I’ll be going off for a prayer walk now! Talk to you guys later! (If you are still around) 😛
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