Janellebelovedpig

@acancello @kyronthearcanin @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings OOH I wanna go!!

I glance at my watch; How is it already so late? It might be best to go home. I have no clue where I’m going, and the girl is nowhere to be seen.

I turn to walk out the tree I came out of, to find the opening is gone. My heart beats quickly. It was just her…[Read more]

@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings

I’m a little late, but here…

With a stunning light, I am somewhere else. Where, I don’t know, but I know it is far, far away from the place I knew. Yellowed grass spreads out in a wide circle around the tree I’m in, and from there it gets greener until there are hills, and trees beyond them.…[Read more]

Oooh! Fun!!

@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings

I cock my head as she disappears into the portal. I go up to the tree and try to open the door. It opens much easier than I expected. The light shines out, blinding me. With a smile and my curiosity getting the better of me, I walk through…

(Don’t know why that was in pre…[Read more]

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Here’s the next bit of the Dragonsbane Society:

Kirah sat at a long wooden table, in between Cora and Leif. Amara sat across from her, as did Banner, Rollan, and Elryn. She hadn’t yet touched the food in front of her. The visions had stolen her appetite away, and t…[Read more]

@esther-c @janellebelovedpig @keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings  @acancello @all those I’ve forgotten lol

Here’s Brycen’s first POV for Chapter 3:

Brycen ducked under a tent flap, moving swiftly and silently. A black cloak followed behind him, the hood up to hide his face. In his hand was a necklace- expensive, with some kind of…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

I’m getting more intrigued as I read. I love where this is going! 😄

@janellebelovedpig

The next 2 chapters you wrote are amazing! I love how each chapter draws you in! Like @kyronthearcanin , I am excited to see where its heading!

@janellebelovedpig

I love part two and three! The storyline is really good, and I’m excited to see where it’s heading. 🙂

Alright! I’m just gonna keep the chapters on here instead of making a different forum, so ignore the name. 🤣

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Definitely let me know if Nia went way off the rails… I’m not the greatest at… I don’t know what to call it. Villian writing? She’s not exactly a…[Read more]

Random thought rq, Blackhorn’s speech was normally italicized, but it didn’t do that when I transferred it, so that’s why it’s weird. 😅 Thanks to everyone who reads through that lol.

@janellebelovedpig

Thanks!!! 😃

@felicity

Thanks! And I get it, sometimes I even confuse myself with worlds that I built. 🤣

Hmmm…. Good question. I guess I’d…[Read more]

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And yeah, this is the same Elryn from before, just younger. I just realized I already put him somewhere, and it would be confusing, so… Yeah. 😅🤣 This is a later version, so that last one had his name with an ‘i’ instead of a ‘y’. But the plan is to make a book later about Elryn specifically, which is the scene in…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

I really like it! I could definitely get a feel for the characters.

I’ll totally read more if you post some more! 😀

I agree with Solfyre, that the names remind me of Pilgrim’s Progess. But of course that’s not a bad thing! 🙂

Keep up the good work!! 😄

@acancello

Ok, thanks!! That’s a really good idea about having a post ready just in case. 😄

@janellebelovedpig

Thanks for the tips!!

What would your hypothetical blog be about? Do you think you would post any of your fiction WIP on there? Who’s your audience? If this hypothetically maybe possibility becomes a reality, will you share a link wit…

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@janellebelovedpig

Yes! I love Narnia, and really enjoyed this! Sometimes I’m nervous to read fanfictions on books I like, because I’m worried it will change the book to much, but this definitely didn’t! Good job!

@janellebelovedpig

Good work! I enjoyed reading it and would totally read more! 🙂

The names make me think of Pilgrim’s Progress (that’s not a bad thing lol), which makes sense, because they’re both allegorical. Makes me want to read it again.

@janellebelovedpig

I really like it! I really like the characters names and how they do seem real. I dont see any mistakes or anything wrong with it. (Reading on here is fine, I dont think you need a google doc. Are you posting more? 🙂