Janellebelovedpig

@janellebelovedpig

I love this!!! 🙂

I agree with @felicity. The descriptions made it seem so real, without losing the style of writing. Well done! 😃

@janellebelovedpig

I like this! The description of the Sanctuary is beautiful. Keep up the good work!

@elanor

Then at the same time my heart aches for all the unsaved friends that I have who have no interest in Christ at all and I’m thinking Lord wait maybe with time I can plant enough seeds and you’ll change they’re stony hearts.

Yes, it is a balance between wanting Jesus to return and also wanting Him to wait so the unsaved can repent. I am sp…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Amen! Those two verses pretty well sum it up. Lately I feel both overwhelmed with a call for home and to stay here as long as I can to reach as many as I can with Christ’s light.

Yess. I’ve gotten myself into the indie Christian author corner via KP and then on to other similar things and I think I’ll have endless reads there…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Great poem! I love how you based it off of Psalm 19! I think everyone else gave some good suggestions for punctuation, so I won’t say much, except, keep up the good work! 😉

@janellebelovedpig

Thanks! I really like this part of yours!

Up and through and by and with

In dark storms or peaceful bliss

Down and out and up and in

He’s trustworthy; don’t forget.

@starshiness

Love your poem For My Sake. I could tell by the first line that it was about a sister!! 😉 I have four sisters and this line is so true:  Because I…[Read more]

@acancello @kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @janellebelovedpig

…so I’m hoping it’s okay for me to jump in, but if not feel free to ignore this…

also please excuse my terrible usage of telling too much and the poor formatting and horrible transitions XD

For a while she was silent. Then with a huff…

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@janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin

Sorry, I messed up everyone’s names 🙂

I really like “In too deep” but we can think of more if you want 🙂

@janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin

I really dont know how it should go yet 😀 But heres the whole story together. It might help anyone create another piece 🙂 What should we call it? Or should we wait till its finished. We can start thinking of names now!

One bright sunny day, I watched a gir…[Read more]

@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12

@esther-c

Heheh I think I gave a rough cliffhanger there.  😅🤣

Any ideas for the next part of the story?

@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyrontheracanin

Oooh, so I don’t have any ideas for the next part of the story, but I think the boy should be named Griffin or Silas. I can’t choose which. 😛

@elanor Thank you!! Your poem is beautiful as well; what a joy to be inspired by the attributes of our God and create poetry from it in our meditations!

@janellebelovedpig Thanks! 😊 Well kinda! I’ve never had to lose someone close to me or have a friend who had to “fight to live” in that sense, but the prompt this grew from was “give someone a…[Read more]

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone

Here’s the next section on Jade. It’s sort of small.

Jade wrapped her cloak tighter around herself, shivering in the bitter wind. The trip to Brekya would be a long one, but it seemed necessary. Dragon scouts were there, dragons that had used some kind of ma…[Read more]

@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c

Idk how often we’re circling back, but here:

The girl’s hands flew to her hips and she skewered me with her glare. “Why do you, a complete stranger, need to know my business? Isn’t that kind of nosy?”

I shrugged. “Maybe. Let’s just start with your name, t…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig Helloooo! *waves* It’s a pleasure to meet you and read this gorgeous work of poetry! I love the use of slant rhyme, it’s so perfect for this piece; it sounds like a literal psalm from the Bible! Oo you’re writing an allegory?? Coolio, me too!!

As for a few words on poetry punctuation, I would say that it’s not always necessary…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Yw!!

Oooh, awesome!! 😀

@janellebelovedpig

Here are my ideas for punctuation. I put them all in bold.

The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever,

Desirable far beyond refined gold.

Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether,

Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb.

Turning simple to wise,

Righteous, rejoicing the heart,

Purely, the light of my eyes,

Cleansing…

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@thearcaneaxiom

Yeah! I think I’m gonna go with Tali as the shifter.  Brycen’s POV can then be sort of misleading, because you might expect it to be him, but idk.

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone

Here’s the next part of the Dragonsbane Society!

Brycen met Aiden at the Badger just as the…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Those poems you wrote are amazing!! I would share some of mine, but I have them all saved to my moms computer which we packed away. I like to write about nature, people and basically everything! My most recent poem was for my neighbors, when they moved I gave it to them and they cried. It was all about how much of an impact…[Read more]