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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin
I really dont know how it should go yet 😀 But heres the whole story together. It might help anyone create another piece 🙂 What should we call it? Or should we wait till its finished. We can start thinking of names now!
One bright sunny day, I watched a gir…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12
Heheh I think I gave a rough cliffhanger there. 😅🤣
Any ideas for the next part of the story?
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Esther replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyrontheracanin
Oooh, so I don’t have any ideas for the next part of the story, but I think the boy should be named Griffin or Silas. I can’t choose which. 😛
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Starshiness replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 9 months ago
@elanor Thank you!! Your poem is beautiful as well; what a joy to be inspired by the attributes of our God and create poetry from it in our meditations!
@janellebelovedpig Thanks! 😊 Well kinda! I’ve never had to lose someone close to me or have a friend who had to “fight to live” in that sense, but the prompt this grew from was “give someone a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone
Here’s the next section on Jade. It’s sort of small.
Jade wrapped her cloak tighter around herself, shivering in the bitter wind. The trip to Brekya would be a long one, but it seemed necessary. Dragon scouts were there, dragons that had used some kind of ma…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c
Idk how often we’re circling back, but here:
The girl’s hands flew to her hips and she skewered me with her glare. “Why do you, a complete stranger, need to know my business? Isn’t that kind of nosy?”
I shrugged. “Maybe. Let’s just start with your name, t…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
@janellebelovedpig Helloooo! *waves* It’s a pleasure to meet you and read this gorgeous work of poetry! I love the use of slant rhyme, it’s so perfect for this piece; it sounds like a literal psalm from the Bible! Oo you’re writing an allegory?? Coolio, me too!!
As for a few words on poetry punctuation, I would say that it’s not always necessary…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Here are my ideas for punctuation. I put them all in bold.
The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever,
Desirable far beyond refined gold.
Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether,
Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb.
Turning simple to wise,
Righteous, rejoicing the heart,
Purely, the light of my eyes,
Cleansing…
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Yeah!
I think I’m gonna go with Tali as the shifter.ÂBrycen’s POV can then be sort of misleading, because you might expect it to be him, but idk.@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone
Here’s the next part of the Dragonsbane Society!
Brycen met Aiden at the Badger just as the…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 9 months ago
Those poems you wrote are amazing!! I would share some of mine, but I have them all saved to my moms computer which we packed away. I like to write about nature, people and basically everything! My most recent poem was for my neighbors, when they moved I gave it to them and they cried. It was all about how much of an impact…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@acancello @kyronthearcanin @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings OOH I wanna go!!
I glance at my watch; How is it already so late? It might be best to go home. I have no clue where I’m going, and the girl is nowhere to be seen.
I turn to walk out the tree I came out of, to find the opening is gone. My heart beats quickly. It was just her…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings
I’m a little late, but here…
With a stunning light, I am somewhere else. Where, I don’t know, but I know it is far, far away from the place I knew. Yellowed grass spreads out in a wide circle around the tree I’m in, and from there it gets greener until there are hills, and trees beyond them.…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @janellebelovedpig @kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @light-warrior-pen @starshiness @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @orielle21 @sarafini @anyone-else-interested
Hey, guys!!
So I wrote some fan fiction. Yep, I did it, I finally succumbed. 😂
I know some of…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oooh! Fun!!
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings
I cock my head as she disappears into the portal. I go up to the tree and try to open the door. It opens much easier than I expected. The light shines out, blinding me. With a smile and my curiosity getting the better of me, I walk through…
(Don’t know why that was in pre…[Read more]
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Allison started the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 9 months ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @euodia-vision @janellebelovedpig @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkeness6
I was just wondering if anyone on KP still write poetry and/or haiku’s? I was wondering if you wanted to talk about them, share them and critique them for each other! Just let me know!
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Allison started the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @kyrothearcain @janellebelovedpig @landric @booksbyjayna @euodia-vision @everyone who wants to join!
I made up a fun game that we all can play! So its crazy easy… Step one, im going to post a sentence, paragraph, huge piece etc of unfinished work. Then one of you are going to add the next piece…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @whoever-else
Here’s the next bit of the Dragonsbane Society:
Kirah sat at a long wooden table, in between Cora and Leif. Amara sat across from her, as did Banner, Rollan, and Elryn. She hadn’t yet touched the food in front of her. The visions had stolen her appetite away, and t…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@esther-c @janellebelovedpig @keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings @acancello @all those I’ve forgotten lol
Here’s Brycen’s first POV for Chapter 3:
Brycen ducked under a tent flap, moving swiftly and silently. A black cloak followed behind him, the hood up to hide his face. In his hand was a necklace- expensive, with some kind of…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m getting more intrigued as I read. I love where this is going! 😄
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