Janellebelovedpig

@janellebelovedpig Helloooo! *waves* It’s a pleasure to meet you and read this gorgeous work of poetry! I love the use of slant rhyme, it’s so perfect for this piece; it sounds like a literal psalm from the Bible! Oo you’re writing an allegory?? Coolio, me too!!

As for a few words on poetry punctuation, I would say that it’s not always necessary…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Yw!!

Oooh, awesome!! 😀

@janellebelovedpig

Here are my ideas for punctuation. I put them all in bold.

The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever,

Desirable far beyond refined gold.

Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether,

Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb.

Turning simple to wise,

Righteous, rejoicing the heart,

Purely, the light of my eyes,

Cleansing…

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@thearcaneaxiom

Yeah! I think I’m gonna go with Tali as the shifter.  Brycen’s POV can then be sort of misleading, because you might expect it to be him, but idk.

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone

Here’s the next part of the Dragonsbane Society!

Brycen met Aiden at the Badger just as the…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Those poems you wrote are amazing!! I would share some of mine, but I have them all saved to my moms computer which we packed away. I like to write about nature, people and basically everything! My most recent poem was for my neighbors, when they moved I gave it to them and they cried. It was all about how much of an impact…[Read more]

@acancello @kyronthearcanin @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings OOH I wanna go!!

I glance at my watch; How is it already so late? It might be best to go home. I have no clue where I’m going, and the girl is nowhere to be seen.

I turn to walk out the tree I came out of, to find the opening is gone. My heart beats quickly. It was just her…[Read more]

@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings

I’m a little late, but here…

With a stunning light, I am somewhere else. Where, I don’t know, but I know it is far, far away from the place I knew. Yellowed grass spreads out in a wide circle around the tree I’m in, and from there it gets greener until there are hills, and trees beyond them.…[Read more]

Oooh! Fun!!

@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings

I cock my head as she disappears into the portal. I go up to the tree and try to open the door. It opens much easier than I expected. The light shines out, blinding me. With a smile and my curiosity getting the better of me, I walk through…

(Don’t know why that was in pre…[Read more]

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @whoever-else

Here’s the next bit of the Dragonsbane Society:

Kirah sat at a long wooden table, in between Cora and Leif. Amara sat across from her, as did Banner, Rollan, and Elryn. She hadn’t yet touched the food in front of her. The visions had stolen her appetite away, and t…[Read more]

@esther-c @janellebelovedpig @keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings  @acancello @all those I’ve forgotten lol

Here’s Brycen’s first POV for Chapter 3:

Brycen ducked under a tent flap, moving swiftly and silently. A black cloak followed behind him, the hood up to hide his face. In his hand was a necklace- expensive, with some kind of…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

I’m getting more intrigued as I read. I love where this is going! 😄

@janellebelovedpig

The next 2 chapters you wrote are amazing! I love how each chapter draws you in! Like @kyronthearcanin , I am excited to see where its heading!

@janellebelovedpig

I love part two and three! The storyline is really good, and I’m excited to see where it’s heading. 🙂

Alright! I’m just gonna keep the chapters on here instead of making a different forum, so ignore the name. 🤣

Tags: @janellebelovedpig @felicity @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else

Definitely let me know if Nia went way off the rails… I’m not the greatest at… I don’t know what to call it. Villian writing? She’s not exactly a…[Read more]

Random thought rq, Blackhorn’s speech was normally italicized, but it didn’t do that when I transferred it, so that’s why it’s weird. 😅 Thanks to everyone who reads through that lol.

@janellebelovedpig

Thanks!!! 😃

@felicity

Thanks! And I get it, sometimes I even confuse myself with worlds that I built. 🤣

Hmmm…. Good question. I guess I’d…[Read more]

@acancello @janellebelovedpig

And yeah, this is the same Elryn from before, just younger. I just realized I already put him somewhere, and it would be confusing, so… Yeah. 😅🤣 This is a later version, so that last one had his name with an ‘i’ instead of a ‘y’. But the plan is to make a book later about Elryn specifically, which is the scene in…[Read more]