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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
*Takes in a deep breath to explain the game if needed*
*Takes an even deeper breath*Â I explain Quidditch.
XD
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Looks interesting! I’ll have to see where I can watch it.
I am a LOTR nerd and have all the back stories and sketchbooks and Tolkien notes, etc. So seeing this story done in film and having it true to the book was amazing!!! Peter Jackson just redeemed himself after what he did with LOTR itself in leaving out so many things…
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I didn’t realize that Alan being forced to use magic was similar to the gorbs forcing Aaron and Oliver Wilson to become wizards until I was writing on this chapter. So I had to come up with a reason on the spot to explain why Oliver was helping Cyrus. Did his reasons for walking away from Alan make sense?
The way I looked at it w…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@linus-smallprint  @stephie   @liberty    @hybridlore     @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr   @loopylin   @freed_and_redeemed   @mineralizedwritings   @grcr
Here’s the movie balled. Oh the music! It was amazing!!!
This is a story I can stand behind concerning women fighting. She fought when she was defending women and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@linus-smallprint  @stephie   @liberty    @hybridlore     @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr   @loopylin   @freed_and_redeemed   @mineralizedwritings   @grcr
HAS ANYONE SEEN THIS!!!!!????
It was amazing!!!! I saw it in theaters with friends and am now trying to scrape together the money to take my family! It was AMAZIN…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings   @grcr
My initial reaction when I open KP and people have changed their profile pics and now I can’t figure out who on earth this person is and why they are tagging me.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Merry Christmas!!!
Oh I saw that coming! This is good, Linus. I do have one complaint.
This is an emotional moment, but I don’t see much emotion in Alan’s prayer.
I would suggest pausing in between fragments of prayer and describing what Alan is doing and feeling in that moment.
Exactly. This was just what I was thi…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
That’s beautiful!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
oh me too! I love the redemption characters!!
wait! Rolf Klaus!! Not Rolf Klaus from The Baker Family Adventures?!?!
oh yes, I have often thought of that. I find so many aspects of writing a small reflection of God and us.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
oh I was mostly teasing. Lol. 😂
I would never be comfortable in a place like that from what it sounds like, but Rory might go just because he has no idea what is going on and what a dance even is. lol.
we’ll see if he ends up peeking in there.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
“Do you want some lip gloss, buddy?”
-My sister, again
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
“IT LOOKS JUST LIKE A REAL PIG!”
-My sister
No context *laughs*
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I won’t tell y’all exactly who said this, but Xmas day:
“My burps smell like cookies and I need something healthy”
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago

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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Hmmmm the challenge which all of us Christian writers face…writing good scenes where the characters pray.
I’m not going to pretend to be good at this.
However, I do have a couple things to point out. Firstly, I noticed that you like to write down the entire prayer in italics like the character’s thoughts. Now, this…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Merry Christmas!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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