Janellebelovedpig

@linus-smallprint

I have the same thought as Hybrid here. Beric has not only been independent for a while now, but he is also a teen. I’m glad you included the scene of his struggle to listen.

Thanks. It actually wasn’t in the first or second draft. I had a reference made to it in the third, but I thought I should flush it out into a full s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Sounds good!

I’ll see if I can get at least one of your new sections done today.

Wonderful!! Thanks! Looking forward to it!

@linus-smallprint

Also, what about Andrew Peterson’s Carry the Fire? We both agreed on that one.

Okay yeah, we did. That one is a great song.

Oh, looks like you mentioned the editor question. Ignore my second offer. I thought you might have missed it.Glad you found a good person for the job!

😉

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know how to send doc. links. so, here are my answers.

The Narrow Path Trilogy: Book One – The Cost Feedback Questions

Character

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Alan. Because he was the redemption character, and I LOVE redemption characters. If you look at my…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

My sister managed to get away with one-word answers for the questions I did for my first draft

lol. That sounds like my brother.

I’m on it. Give me one sec….

@liberty

one older brother

LUCKYYYYYYY!!!!! That’s why I like Phil so much. He’s my fictional older brother.

I’m the oldest with two younger brothers and a younger sister.

My friend actually had Summer of Suspense and lent it to me. I liked it so much I looked up the author to see if she wrote anything else, and then I discovered it was…[Read more]

@liberty

OH IT IS SO GOOD!

You must read it!

You won’t be able to put it down. It is stressful!!!

(Peder is my favorite character by the way.)

@liberty

No! I’ve never been to Highland games. That sounds AMAZING!

Have you?

My dad has the German. Our last name is actually German, and I look very German, though my brothers take after the highlander and irish side.

@hybridlore

Mainly just feedback. I have an actually editor who can catch typos, but if you see anything then you can mention it.

I hope Amelia doesn’t die.

Oh dear.

That would be an interesting twist—if everyone thinks she’s going to have the plague, but then she really ends up having a baby. But we shall see.

Hmm, it would be.…[Read more]

@liberty

Oh this is WAY better then Mufasa!

No, I haven’t. My family is waiting for a time when we can watch it without my very little sister. She couldn’t see a movie like that!

@liberty

Gahahaha!!! It’s sounds like Legolas and Aragorn looking for Gollum!

Is that good or bad? lolol

Alastair isn’t Gollum! *gasp* how horrid!

Hey…when you said this something struck me. Do you like Rolf so much because he’s German? *grin* I mean, this just reminds me of your German couple!

giggles sheepishly.

Well, being German as we…[Read more]

@liberty

It’s already available on Amazon Prime.

@liberty

I KNOW!!!!

We need The Hunt For Alastair, or something like that. Maybe Fergus and Jigson team up to find him!!

No, no, no! No Fergus and Abby. They would never work. They would kill each other! Rolf just seems so alive when he’s around Abby, and Abby seems so grown up around Rolf. Think of him coming into the kitchen of their own…[Read more]

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We’ll see if this works, but I have decided randomly and impulsively that I will have this whole book posted on here by the end of the year.

Expect big sections in the time to come.

However, if I’m going to get this done it means that those of y’all who d…[Read more]

@liberty

You’ll have to watch it because I DO NOT spoil things. ESPECIALLY character deaths.

After you watch it we’ll have to talk. It’s streaming starting today so you can probably find it pretty easy.

@hybridlore

I was going to say, it seems weird that Beric would change so quickly, but now I see he’s still going to struggle.

Yeah. That new Christian/new place/new family/ thrill has just started to ware off, and now he’s hitting the hard part.

Then how does Sabina’s statement make sense?

Hmm. I’m not sure, I might cut that. In the fir…[Read more]

@liberty

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Not just someone……..

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

@liberty

I LOVE THAT SERIES!!!! BEST BOOK SERIES EVER!!!!!!!!

Oh they are so good!!!!! Phil is my favorite. Then Rolf and Alastair. Oh, and I like Furgus too. Oh yes, and Jigson!!!

AH!!!!!! I can’t believe you read them too!!!!!!

I read Summer of Suspense through to Rescued in the Rockies.

SHE’S COMING OUT WITH ANOTHER!!!!???? I thought…[Read more]

@liberty

Do check it out! I took the family to see it this morning. It was the second time in a row for me in the space of just a few days, and it’s as good as the first time! Maybe even better.

Warning: When i first saw it my friend and I were hanging onto each other for several parts, and there was one section where we both cried. In the…[Read more]