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@godlyfantasy12

*claps. Wipes eyes with hankie* Beautifully said? Bravissimo!

*humbly bows, hands you another tissue* More beautiful to write than to actually experience, ha ha! 😀

@mineralizedwritings

Hey I love helping people with plot issues! If you feel like sharing 😁 one of my favorite things in my book is trying to connect everything.

Thanks! I was telling Koshka a little about it if you want to give your thoughts…

And lol, your little speech about the land of unfulfilled dreams. I’ve been there before lol. I’m not…

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@koshka

*Loud, stormy applause*

*peeks out from behind piles of notebooks* Wait, someone’s clapping?

I’ve also just finished college finals for the year, so that’s a relief on time.

Congratulations! It must feel good to have them done.

I need to be more steady in my writing. Maybe that means better accountability, maybe that means working it in…

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@godlyfantasy

Yeah Paxton is super cute! Great picture!

@godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @anyone

*shuffles in glumly*

Hello fellow writers. Greetings from the land of unfulfilled dreams. Here it is 36*F and the sun is sluggishly cold. In this land are many different kinds of people of all trades and occupations. Actually, some of them don’t have any occupation yet, just…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks for thinking of me! 😀 I’ve actually *cringe* never read WFS…so…I’ll probably stay away from this topic just so I don’t spoil it for if I ever get around to reading it/watching it.

@lightoverdarkness

Goodmorning…a day late. 😀

(You see, since I went to bed so late, I slept through all of yesterday and am only just waking up now!)

JK

@lightoverdarkness6

My brother asks me questions like that all the time!! One of his favorites to ask me is ‘would you rather marry someone who’s really cute but doesn’t love you or someone who isn’t as cute but does love you?’ XD I’m always like “what kind of question is that?!” Lol

He’s probably just trying to get a reaction out of you… 😀

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@sarafini

Sad but…sweet, because he saves their lives.

@godlyfantasy12

I’m pretty sure that is Chris Hemsworth 😂 dressed up for a movie probably lol

Lol! I think you’re right 😁

Also… ALBERT’S BROTHER IS SO CUTE HE BETTER FORGIVE HIM 🤣

🤣 You may be right on that too… 🤣

I have a problem 😂

Don’t we all?? 😆

@godlyfantasy12

Awesome!!

@koshka

Thx!!

Yeah. I’m a big fan of Leanna Crawford. She’s a newer artist. She specifically writes songs for teenage girls, but a lot of them can be applied to anybody.

@godlyfantasy12

I’m not entirely sure what happens to Lukas. 😂 I’m a plantser, so I have a plot, but it morphs as I write.

Also, I’m really glad that you’re enjoying the story, bc that’s really encouraging!! 😊

@godlyfantasy12

Don’t worry! They’ll be fine… for now.😁

I can’t have them get hurt …yet… 😏😁

 

I was a bit confused on the ending just a bit maybe make it a little more clear on what all took place and if they got away or not (the boys I mean)

Ok! 👍 I’ll keep that in mind.

(btw, I love your signature! &#…

@ava-blue @mineralizedwritings @felicity @freedomwriter76 @arien @starofthenorth

This is Amidala’s playlist: (keep in mind, I occasionally add more songs 😅)

“As I Am” Skye Peterson

“Rest Easy” Andrew Peterson

“Come to Me” Skye Peterson

“This is What They Meant” Leanna Crawford

“Just As I Am” Andrew Peterson

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Y’all!! I was listening to the song “Fragile Heart” by Leanna Crawford and I think it fits really well for Albert’s situation! 🥲 (And maybe Ethan. I’m still working on his story)

@felicity @starofthenorth @koshka @lightoverdarkness6

Here are their families! I don’t have names yet, only face claims. 😁

@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @felicity @theloonyone @godlyfantasy12

Btw, in the tenth chapter, I abruptly mention something about Ami being a Christian. I know it is kind of out of nowhere, but I’ll go back and fix it on the second draft. 🙂 And I kind of forget about Artemis as well. 😬 What else are first drafts for? 😁

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